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Old 01-10-05, 11:06 PM   #1
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Yo I figured I'd drop another tryout


I got mo bitches than a dog havin nothin but girls/
Yea I get all tha hoes so every night I'm gettin twirled/
Pass em' around like a baton a different girl on every arm/
And if A nigga fuck wit me I'm goin off like a alarm/
Sprayin aeverything in site, fuck niggaz dat wanna fight/
You mean mug u feel a slug, turn ya ass off like a light/
And if a nigga want beef then I blow is back out/
Cuz I can't be seen like t.v. in a blackout/
I smackout on niggaz like I was on a fast break/
And I'm a murderous nigga from tha greatlake state/
D-Town to be exact, where we cut niggaz no slack/
And a nigga fuckin wit me is like tryna post up Shaq/
That shit'll neva happen might as well call it wrap/
And for u hard headed niggaz I'm hittin harder than Sapp/
So don't test me, cuz I don't fail exams/
I tell all bitches blow me like my niggaz blowin on gans/
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Old 01-10-05, 11:43 PM   #2
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who the fuck's mc.cm???


We have recently got new member's, but your not one of them. If your an alias pm me.

If this is your real name take our sig out.

Hnic, sorry no.
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Old 01-11-05, 09:50 AM   #3
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Hey fi-del.

You already said no but i am only gonna ask once more. If its still no i wint hassle your thread.

Below is a quick verse i worte for the AI tryouts but they are dead so i hear.

Lifes tribulations

A quick short verse of the tribulations of life
If you really want to know ask Brad Pitt’s wife
Usually refer to you wife as trouble and strife
But shes split now, and shes fit with a hype,
watch all the famous guys going in for the swipe
Quicker than Twister spitting a well written rhyme.

I cant see how he could drive Jen round the bend
But She will survive cos shes still got her “friends”
Relationships break up, your left to get on the mend
The end is always around the corner, Lets not pretend

But the tribulation that’s on most of the worlds mind
Think of the worst natural shit today to happen to mankind
Unlucky people in Asia hit by the Tsunami big wave
By wave I dont mean the one you see at a football game
I mean the natural disaster where theres no one to blame
A damn shame, people left with nothing to claim
Who will Bush hold responsible and take aim?
Lets all be sensible, and donate money for relief aid.

Personal tribulation, shit that happens fucking daily
spend 20mins at the bus stop waiting, aggrevated.
Bus finally comes get moving, arrive at the train station
Only to see the driver aint patient,
Hes fucked off and you weren’t even late!


What you think? holla at me
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Old 01-11-05, 09:36 PM   #4
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yo im under a alias let me in foo!
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Old 01-12-05, 01:02 AM   #5
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Who are you? ?
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Old 01-12-05, 09:01 AM   #6
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He didnt pm me so he aint shit. Take that sig out. unless you holler at me explaining what's up.
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Old 01-12-05, 01:21 PM   #7
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aight im tryin out again... my record shows enough... ill drop some of my shit here....

This is my poetry battle against flow intelligent for poetry league:

1964


The writing on the wall, the jumbled mess of words
destroys my inner brian, eating away at the very fiber of my soul
one mans torture written out acrossed the cement walls of his cell
for all to see, what was he immagining when he wrote
"Sleep daddy, sleep daddy, sleep forever no more"
upon the corner of the floor where he died the night before
this young man so old and hungrey for the world who
cast him aside like yesterdays garbage played out for everyone
his own metaphorical armegedon upon these very walls
falling apart as i read, the immages that enter my mind seem
to be swalowing me whole, taking away my verry innocence just by
reading on, the words i see are horrible accounts of the daily "life"
of the so called madman from 39th street, whos brutial murders were
the hottest news of 1964 in town of maulberry creek, here he tells
of each and every sinister account, writtin in gastley detail upon
the now seamingly fleshy walls of the inner most part of the state
prison where he spent the last 62 years of his life in solitude
shuned by the world and forced to sit and fester over his doings
in hopes that one day he will be forgiven and be set free, maybe
not in body but in spirit, given the oprotunity to stand before
god himself and repent for his horrid deeds, and be alowed to walk
amongst those he hurt in heaven, alowed to talk to them and
say he was sorry for what he had done, but whos to say that
this will ever happen for inmate 15993, one can only sit back
and read another tale the wall has to offer and slip into fantasy
hoping, praying for the man who lost it all one summer night in 1964


This next one is from a text battle against Mystirious (Zeke)... Zeke was
20-0 on all alias names ...i KOd him...here it is

Aight look.......


Like the legend of bigfoot, ya rhymes are mysterious
thinkin he can win... shit this kid must be dalerious
kid has to be an alias cause he came at me pretty damn quick
now mysterious u know u cant rhyme bitch so get off my dick
ya new and already make me sick so get ready to feel it u fuckin prick
no one knows you so why should i care, come on run yo mout i dare
soon youll be flailing around like a bunny caught in a hunters snare
here lookin for fame, sit and watch while i tarnish ya name
and all of RV will fuckin do the same, cause u aint shit in this game
ya shits straight lame and your wack enough to match
your careers gonna be shorter than that of charlie batch
i see myself asking, why does this dude try to rap
probably for the same reason this prep shops at the gap
caue he thinks hes hard but inside this fags soft like a baked cookie
in for a rude awakaning when all of RV gang bangs this rookie
face it, nothin you say will ever change one single fact
you will neva be a gangsta no matter how hard you act
and i hope that settles well with you and you learn to deal
with the fact that you will never make it and thats just bein real
with you... dont even bother, quit while you still standing
cause this shits to hard for you, the lifes to demanding
so sit the fuck back and wait for your crash landing
cause you leavin in a body bag, never again to spit a rhyme
im doin u a favor, ya death is here, its the end of the line


This next one is from my battle with parallel (Exclusive) i won 5-1


haha! fuck this kid.... look

fuck this faggot, must be livin in a PARALLEL universe
hearin ya shit reminds me more of a plague or a curse
cause all of RV knows you cant spit a real ass verse
ya leavin in a herse, be prepared for this to be ya last battle
cause soon this kids gonna be shook harder than a babys rattle
ya just anotha little boy who cant drop hardcore hooks
i hear ya gonna do audio... musta learned from garth brooks
readin country music song books and aint gettin no looks
from anyone in the fuckin game you claim to love so much
cause no ones ever gonna respect you, ya have no touch
no tallent and no future, ya might as well up and quit
kill ya self faggot, go and get ya wrists slit
cause i know you cant deal with the fact you cat rap
deep down you know your just anotha prep that shops at the gap
so give up, gather ya shit and just move on home
dont make me up and split open ya emptey dome
ya brainles faggot, why do you even bother to try
fuck you bitch, ya been merked, run home and cry

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Old 01-12-05, 02:20 PM   #8
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Old 01-12-05, 04:29 PM   #9
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lol my votes in.. and everyone drop feedback on my battle..

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171646
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Old 01-12-05, 05:31 PM   #10
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new method why u always gotta hate son... i dropped my shit for a try out... yeah u beat me... so the fuck what... i know im council material. so get off my back kid
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Old 01-13-05, 12:01 AM   #11
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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1891032
^^dats a link of a KO i juss had. i noe im council material. get back at me and tell me if im down
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Old 01-13-05, 07:55 PM   #12
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iight I'm back for a second try. Check the link in my sig and if you don't like that than I got more with better. and I'm gonn drop some new open mics. Check those too.

Peace.
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Old 01-14-05, 08:12 PM   #13
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iight I'm waiting on my answer. If I need to drop summin I will.
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Old 01-14-05, 08:30 PM   #14
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ayo im trying out for this crew...been here since the beginning...i think around march of last year...anyways...lemme know if i have to drop something or just check one of the links below...

im text right now...but ill be going audio soon wit phat mic...


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Old 01-14-05, 08:32 PM   #15
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um...oh and my recent alias was class.sic but i changed it for a friend...d.j em sce...anyways...i was beating intensify effect but he turned into a mod and started dq'ing my votes...it wasnt my best battle but i still beat him...pz..
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