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Old 07-19-04, 03:49 AM   #106
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this is my debut for which im long overdue
no need to reveiw im here to come through

i make niggas become beleivers threw my rhymes
while their chicks blow me more then wind chimes

i left the throwbacks shaking with a heart attack
you skip a beat and your fucked worse then iraq

Desmoloshing these weak rappers verses worse then m&m
stemulating your body like cancer befor it hits your brain stem

leaving fake ass wannab emcees looking like the red sea
i garantee il suceed with everything your can thow at me
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Old 07-19-04, 03:50 AM   #107
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theirs my tryout i know im new but im active alot so give me a chance or atleast some feedback
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Old 07-19-04, 11:15 AM   #108
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with work you will get better.....i'll give you a chance welcome .......okay now everybody report to our new sub forum
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Old 07-23-04, 01:44 PM   #109
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I'll be droppin somthin for ya soon
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Old 07-23-04, 01:45 PM   #110
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I'm still workin on it
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Old 07-23-04, 02:13 PM   #111
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yo check out mah stuff in freeagents
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Old 07-23-04, 02:13 PM   #112
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wait didnt ya used 2 be in D2R???????
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Old 07-23-04, 02:14 PM   #113
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aint ya ctually prdigy the person from D2R
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Old 07-24-04, 05:23 PM   #114
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Heres my tryout...

Im not Santana but ill bring the Jewelz(Juelz)...
Im not the paper boy but ill bring the news...
Just sit down unless u ready to lose...
I came here to collect my dues...
I bust shots n leave ur white t lookin like a jersey...
Im like the orkin man eradicatin the pest...
When my rounds r empty ull b left wit out a chest...
Itll make the mortician sick and the athiest think hes blessed...
Nuthin can protect u from me not even a vest...
Ive finally emerged, the one they call the best...
So step down or be defeated like the rest...

check out my open mic 2
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Old 07-24-04, 06:37 PM   #115
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iight... checkin in. trigga you already peeped my shit but i'll spit again if you want me to?
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Old 07-24-04, 07:26 PM   #116
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go check in our sub crew fourm
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Old 07-24-04, 07:28 PM   #117
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Old 07-28-04, 03:06 PM   #118
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this is the white night, outa site
if you wanna get with me just holla tonight
you know i'm tight, i bring light
to all the darkest situations, damn right
i'll be on every radio station,
i'm so good, i spit rhymes in my sleep
make you weep, to your mom who's a creep
come and get me, catch me if you can
goin 93, all the way across japan
runnin circles 'round your house, laughin in yo face
makin u cry, with my bottle of mace
i'm too fast, too furious for you
i hope you know what your getting yourself into
khuz u noe u gonn lose to me, can't you see
i'm not one of these rednecks from tenesse
i'm the happenist playa, you've ever seeen
i spit mean rhymes like some kinda machine
this isn't it, i've just begun
i'll make you run home back to ure mum
if you want me, come nd get some
i'll be here all week, puncturing ure rectum
if you think yoself to be some kinda... cool guy
i'm here to put a stop to you... and that lie
loved by few, hated by many
respected by all, and that is plenty
people always tellin me be real friendly
and people will be nice to you like mr. bently
but i aint into that, true pimps are cruel
there's a true pimp, standin right in front of you
if you think you betta, stop actin a fool
khuz u noe i'll make yo mouth drool
no, not with spit.. but with blood
khuz i'm the only one spittin spit in the hood
i'll take you to the top, homies gotta stop
bow down in front of me and i'll hit u with a block
when things are dark, i make 'em bright
when there's nothin there i, show the light
when things are bad, i make 'em tight
do you know why? khuz i'm the white night
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Old 07-28-04, 03:14 PM   #119
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WhiteNight:
Nice, But i think you need more elevating..
I'm not sure... Probably not...
I'm not the head of Lyrical Virus...
I'll let the others decide...
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Old 07-28-04, 03:17 PM   #120
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he needs too elevate a lil........
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