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Old 11-29-04, 07:58 PM   #1
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yo peep this and give me some feedback

Socrates and Mike Hawk leaders the new leaders of the feedback clique
Leave your verse and they'll get back to you once Mike's done sucking Soc's dick
Hawk and Socrates live their life thru the net, that's why they never get laid
They'd rather diss your battle verse and use cool words like, wack and plizayed
Siskel and Ebert of Rapverse, destroy your whole ego, but don't have a clue
Except instead of a thumbs up, thumbs down, if we hate it then it's a big Fuck You

That's hizzzzotttttttt, word to ya mother Mike Hawk, Socrates in the house.
yo i even made that shit orange like trigga, word up.
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Old 11-29-04, 08:00 PM   #2
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This is an old battle against Blackwell, i hope ya'll kno who im talkin about, his record is BAD ne wayz;

With a record that's as bad as Shaq's freethrow sheet....
Is that why u hide it now, kause u know you're weak??....

Ima keep baggin on your record kause your rhyming is cheap....
When this battle is over, they'll find your remains in a garbage heap....

Around my way i'm considered a heat champ....
Kause my flows light up blocks like street lamps....

You can't ground my supersonic even if you started trying....
You betta go somewheres else wit them EBAY rhymes u buyin....

Toxic or toxin, panic your logic wit bare knuckle boxin....
Combinin punches, kicks, & elbows jus to add extra props in....

go eazy vets
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Old 11-29-04, 08:01 PM   #3
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LMFAO@ Vango being completely ignored when he tried signing in to LLL.

Vango=garbage
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Old 11-29-04, 08:04 PM   #4
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LMFAO@ Vango being completely ignored when he tried signing in to LLL.

Vango=garbage



Yo that shit was wack, LLL, but can you judge my verse and stay on subject.


Socrates=Sensitive textcee
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Old 11-29-04, 08:03 PM   #5
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Yo socrates, are you coming in the council or joining in another crew???

N e ways, my comp can't copy paste so check this link and copy paste it here and rate it, yes I know hella strechted lines, ya don't gotta mention that

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=162765
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Old 11-29-04, 08:10 PM   #6
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Yo socrates, are you coming in the council or joining in another crew???

N e ways, my comp can't copy paste so check this link and copy paste it here and rate it, yes I know hella strechted lines, ya don't gotta mention that

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=162765


soc answer the question....... read the rest
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Old 11-29-04, 08:05 PM   #7
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With a record that's as bad as Shaq's freethrow sheet....
Is that why u hide it now, kause u know you're weak??....
not a punch
Ima keep baggin on your record kause your rhyming is cheap....
When this battle is over, they'll find your remains in a garbage heap....
no....look into the concept you had in the set up
Around my way i'm considered a heat champ....
Kause my flows light up blocks like street lamps....
never do self glorification....boooooooo!
You can't ground my supersonic even if you started trying....
You betta go somewheres else wit them EBAY rhymes u buyin....
almost a good concept needs better wording
Toxic or toxin, panic your logic wit bare knuckle boxin....
Combinin punches, kicks, & elbows jus to add extra props in....
i like for some reason

You gotta look into what a punch is then you can start elevating cuz I see potential.
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Old 11-30-04, 03:27 PM   #8
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Originally Posted by Socrates
With a record that's as bad as Shaq's freethrow sheet....
Is that why u hide it now, kause u know you're weak??....
not a punch
Ima keep baggin on your record kause your rhyming is cheap....
When this battle is over, they'll find your remains in a garbage heap....
no....look into the concept you had in the set up
Around my way i'm considered a heat champ....
Kause my flows light up blocks like street lamps....
never do self glorification....boooooooo!
You can't ground my supersonic even if you started trying....
You betta go somewheres else wit them EBAY rhymes u buyin....
almost a good concept needs better wording
Toxic or toxin, panic your logic wit bare knuckle boxin....
Combinin punches, kicks, & elbows jus to add extra props in....
i like for some reason

You gotta look into what a punch is then you can start elevating cuz I see potential.


thanks mayne, im always open for new concepts and suggestions
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Old 11-29-04, 08:07 PM   #9
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head games......ya shit was aiight...but please never make me waste time reading troops garbage
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Old 11-29-04, 08:08 PM   #10
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lmao......... ok ok fine , but damn, I was rushed on that shit, s--t--r--e--c--h--e--d
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Old 11-29-04, 08:09 PM   #11
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I'm not touching your's Vango....just know it was garbage.

Dunno about crews Head.

Like women worried bout getting fat, troop watching his back, cuz i'm sick like sars...
he's wack, evertime he raps it's a criminal offense, why else is he always behind bars!
nope
Jimmy "pocket's" shit, like his lines so ya know this kid is a dummy...
*troops* so poor, people break into his house and leave money!
LMFAO
Troop's kneeling and pleading, says he hard.. but that's just d/r he's feeling...
he's a savior? nah, he resurected A.I. and...
...........................got kicked out of the the fucking crew he was leading!
straight fire
Can't think of a punch, so just make a weak comparasin, troop rhymes bout as 'fat' as models...
oh damn! wait, hold up! sorry bout that, my bad troop... was I coppying your style?
no

Jesus Christ the middle two bars wee dope, the others were garbage. Don't ever start a verse with bullshit anymore please. Keep workin hard.
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Old 11-29-04, 08:20 PM   #12
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I'm not touching your's Vango....just know it was garbage.

Dunno about crews Head.

Like women worried bout getting fat, troop watching his back, cuz i'm sick like sars...
he's wack, evertime he raps it's a criminal offense, why else is he always behind bars!
nope
Jimmy "pocket's" shit, like his lines so ya know this kid is a dummy...
*troops* so poor, people break into his house and leave money!
LMFAO
Troop's kneeling and pleading, says he hard.. but that's just d/r he's feeling...
he's a savior? nah, he resurected A.I. and...
...........................got kicked out of the the fucking crew he was leading!
straight fire
Can't think of a punch, so just make a weak comparasin, troop rhymes bout as 'fat' as models...
oh damn! wait, hold up! sorry bout that, my bad troop... was I coppying your style?
no

Jesus Christ the middle two bars wee dope, the others were garbage. Don't ever start a verse with bullshit anymore please. Keep workin hard.

agreeded lmfao that troop line is fucking dope omg i shouldve said that
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Old 11-29-04, 08:12 PM   #13
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I'm pretty sure you got the first punch, but just incase, it means behind bars like jail, also cuz he can only go 8 lines so he's always behind on bars, and ebnind bars meaning my bars are more advanced then his, just incase
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Old 11-29-04, 08:14 PM   #14
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did ya get that??
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Old 11-29-04, 08:16 PM   #15
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Still.........no.
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