nah that was a Freestyle it wasnt a battle verse

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Iight peep this and let me know...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192822

^^ Battle with MarvJay1009

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196166

^^ Open Mic

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Aight Your Both In UE..

Both Got Mad Potential and I Think Will Be The Future of This Site.

Rep Us In The Sigs..

~R~

PM strobe n get our forum R. I'm gonna be gone this weekend so hold shit down.

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

Aight.....ima use Chaos's sig tho cuz its gray like my avy


U.E

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check the battle in my sig.

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vs Tekneek.

I say no, elevate and come back

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my battle.

your battle record is fucked 1&2 soon to be 1&3
cus when this turns to k.onfliktz my verse burns ya like its 9th degree
havin you call M.C firetruck in here to hoes u off
cus my verse leave u whipped from cough (1)
look at his name this kid cant even flow his own verse
he can reimberse his way in a black hearse
Son you better bow down and say your prayers
cus my lines leave ya handicapped more then old fucks in wheelchairs

my 1st love poem.



the love i feel for u is like a Iceage cus we b 2gether for years girl ill always be there for u to catch ya tears protect ya from ya fears the pain i feel feel is like bein stuck wit 1000 spears thinkin of ur sweet lips and voice is like a scratched CD repeating and just wont stop like a Forsaken memory kept bein thought girl ill do watever for you no matter what it is cus u my queen and im ya king girl u know my love sticks out for ya more then a mike tyson swing All I know is that we ment for eachother your the reason why ill wake up tomarrow cus our love is like a 'Deep Impact' From a hallow

my 2nd love poem

ur eyes of truth lips of romance fell in love wit u wit no Second Glance Im still lovin u no matter wat ur Finance thinkin of us 2 being together wit ur head layin on my chest beauty smell of Zest wit u round im neva stressed u hellped me when i was on the bench depressed now again u helped me when it was needed from all the tears I bleeded ur the reson y i succeded

my new 3rd love poem.

girl ill do watever for jus lemme kno what it is that i gotta do Girl you know its true that I LOVE YOU u have helped me when i was Sad deep down inside when I cried my own homie tried but nothin happed jus still tears were comin until u gave me pride u my girl and im ya man we need eachother to stand by oursides until I met u and i got sad ppl would try to cheer me up and al they got was Denide


My LoVe Poem Story



Love is like a footstep cus u gotta follow where it leads you to
its marriage for life where two are in love deep like ink tattoo
Everyday its a love session where u just dont wanna let go
partners are always there no matter how famous u r or ya dough
shes got eyes of truth and lips of romance and a rough amount of sex appeal
needs a guy who can keep her secrets conceal her feel let her kno she real
and have someone who will never lie to her or cheat behind her back
cus relationships grow old and can hurt like build up of plaque
it hurts to see a young female be cheated on and there lifes are shitted on
you gotta let her know that youll be back so shes not up apon and forgone
cus Love is Forsaken and you gotta rspect that cus not everyone gets it
Everyday girls lifes end cus they suffer from depression and slit there writs
girls need a man who would never spit bullshit and cause there heartbroke
cus as far as depression goes violence comes then you end up turnin to coke
splittin up seein different people when you had your chance is sad and wrong
seein 1000 long images of ur girl not being able to hold her head up strong
jus makes you relize what LOVE really was between the couple you were
suddenly crashes and comes into blur thinkin of her thats when the love stirs
searchin for your 1 and only love only findin her body in a ditch
Tears quickly twich its his fault since he decided to switch
he has no idea what to do without her so he buys a rose for her grave
only 2 find out soon enough his life will be taken by the owner who gave
now its us 2 in heaven sharin our passion for one another that we never had
now this LOVE story ends there forever together holdin hands donna & chad

so watcha think am I in.

maybe...

But that battle verse was pretty weak man

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yea my battles suck but ill be a poetic head for u guys ok.

Blah I dunno man u still could use elevation on your poems as well...

I'll leave it up to R

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Well We Have An Elevation Sub-Forum In UE...It Will Be Up Tomorrow..

So I Guess He's In.

How Many Peeps Want Like A Main Crew Which Would Be "Undestructable Emcees" and Then A Sub-Forum Crew Like "Untouchable Emcees" and That Is Where The Less-Talented/Non-Experienced Kids In Our Crew Go and Undestructable Is For Vets and Talented Kids.

?

~R~

^^ I like it...

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The Sub-Forum Crew Is Gonna Be Called "ILL-Mental Emcees"

They Will Have Their Own LiL'Crew In Which I'll Supervise The Mod and Make Sure Their Crew Is Active and Elevating.

Once They Elevate To UE Status They'll Move Up Into The Main Crew.

~R~