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Old 07-28-04, 04:06 PM   #1
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this is the white night, outa site
if you wanna get with me just holla tonight
you know i'm tight, i bring light
to all the darkest situations, damn right
i'll be on every radio station,
i'm so good, i spit rhymes in my sleep
make you weep, to your mom who's a creep
come and get me, catch me if you can
goin 93, all the way across japan
runnin circles 'round your house, laughin in yo face
makin u cry, with my bottle of mace
i'm too fast, too furious for you
i hope you know what your getting yourself into
khuz u noe u gonn lose to me, can't you see
i'm not one of these rednecks from tenesse
i'm the happenist playa, you've ever seeen
i spit mean rhymes like some kinda machine
this isn't it, i've just begun
i'll make you run home back to ure mum
if you want me, come nd get some
i'll be here all week, puncturing ure rectum
if you think yoself to be some kinda... cool guy
i'm here to put a stop to you... and that lie
loved by few, hated by many
respected by all, and that is plenty
people always tellin me be real friendly
and people will be nice to you like mr. bently
but i aint into that, true pimps are cruel
there's a true pimp, standin right in front of you
if you think you betta, stop actin a fool
khuz u noe i'll make yo mouth drool
no, not with spit.. but with blood
khuz i'm the only one spittin spit in the hood
i'll take you to the top, homies gotta stop
bow down in front of me and i'll hit u with a block
when things are dark, i make 'em bright
when there's nothin there i, show the light
when things are bad, i make 'em tight
do you know why? khuz i'm the white night
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Old 07-28-04, 04:14 PM   #2
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WhiteNight:
Nice, But i think you need more elevating..
I'm not sure... Probably not...
I'm not the head of Lyrical Virus...
I'll let the others decide...
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Old 07-28-04, 04:17 PM   #3
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he needs too elevate a lil........
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Old 07-28-04, 04:46 PM   #4
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Ok.. I say hell nah...
It'll make the crew seem like we accept newbies and one that needs a load of elevating
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Old 07-28-04, 07:05 PM   #5
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Ok.. I say hell nah...
It'll make the crew seem like we accept newbies and one that needs a load of elevating

oh shit lol look who talk dawg you only lik 100 post and 3 battles and you talking about newbs lol no beef though just don't act like you been here forever lol. and i prosonally thought it was ok but too simple however you could defiinally ok someday, just not good enough for Lyrical Virus
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Old 07-28-04, 06:42 PM   #6
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true hes not in...............
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Old 07-29-04, 02:46 AM   #7
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ya man im dropin a try out hurr ok
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Old 07-29-04, 02:48 AM   #8
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here it is my try out verse:

(I'm gonna tell you a story about). A slave he took a blaze of coke and woke up in the morning and nearly choked. He grew up on the farm he lived in a barn he only ate corn, He was born 1977 he thought he was in heaven. By the time he hit 11 he was starting to buy pot had lots for alla us. He thought he was a balla. by the time he hit 20 he had silver chains, no brains still in the drain was'nt smart smoked to many darts. By the time he was 43 He begin to feel old and felt real cold cuz he sold to much pot, One night he thought he was gonna get caught. He braught to much pot to a party the cops came his freinds blamed it all on him now thats a sin, It's bin about 10 years since I've seen him on earth. SO what!
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Old 07-29-04, 10:53 AM   #9
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Do you have any battles???
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Old 07-29-04, 03:16 PM   #10
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im tryin out 4 eitha text battlin or topical here go a link:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137989
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Old 07-29-04, 04:11 PM   #11
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Nice drop but u need a little elevating
I say your in For TOPICALLet's see what the others say
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Old 07-29-04, 04:29 PM   #12
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aight koo but where is every1 cuz i wanna know if im in or not ya feel what im sayin
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Old 07-29-04, 06:01 PM   #13
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post your verse in the crew forum
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Old 07-30-04, 05:38 PM   #14
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Upping Looking For More Tryouts
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Old 07-31-04, 05:36 PM   #15
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yo im new but i can drop sum
hot verse check out sum of my
battles if u still need me 2 spit
holla back
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138668

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138650

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