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Old 07-14-05, 09:03 PM   #121
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Thanks Mim, yeah once I saw he got banned on B-Boys and who it was by I knew I had him beat haha. Unfortunately no such easy personals exist on Spitacular
 
Old 07-15-05, 08:17 AM   #122
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shit if thats him in his avy

u can make a punch on how ugly his ass is

looking like he blow kisses at the camera

i signed for 1-2 over there......if theres no personals than basically its easy to pre write wordplay soooo, it seems easier to do wordplay than a good personal, i think ill be aiight
 
Old 07-15-05, 09:53 AM   #123
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Yeah I'll prolly do a pic diss, I just need something really witty.... yeah like blowing a kiss, but gotta be even more. I'll take suggestions haha
 
Old 07-15-05, 10:14 AM   #124
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shit i'd love to help you
i've been viewing all of those top 5 people you gave me
and i really think they are overratted self glorifyers
i wouldnt battle them cuz their DR is UNBELIEVABLE
i signed for 1-2 punch, lets see if they take me.......

but def do one on his pic, if i get i good idea i'll give it to you
 
Old 07-15-05, 10:22 AM   #125
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Hmm, that's weird, I rarely see those 5 I mentioned use self-glory. Occasionally they'll get away with it, but not often. I think you're just not used to their style.. it's a little different than here like I said.

Only things I've thought of is his title is "Da Motherfuckin Champ"... and my name is Da... and this battle is for a champ...so I'm thinking I could do something off that, but prolly wouldn't be good enough. His pic seems to have a lot to diss, I dunno, will just take some thinking, thx
 
Old 07-15-05, 10:38 AM   #126
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use "da" in the set up line for his champ title
then use his pic as the punch.........u right it gotta be real good though
 
Old 07-15-05, 10:47 AM   #127
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^^^^ only time ya verses make sense is when ya bang yur head on the keyboard...
just an idea... playing off his sig
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Old 07-15-05, 11:01 AM   #128
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Yeah thanks for the try, but I don't think that's enough.. a little too simplistic, but yeah maybe something good could be made outta his sig if you applied a cliche to it.

Maybe here's a thought....like hot mentioned it looks like he wants to kiss me.. so I could put that in the setup and say I'm playing hard to get or something then in the punchline be like

Go away ho, or I'll put a seal to ya lips like the one ya jacked from the zoo
 
Old 07-15-05, 11:10 AM   #129
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like the zoo concept....re word it to a punch and add a set up
 
Old 07-15-05, 11:19 AM   #130
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lol at gettin rvs help
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Old 07-15-05, 11:24 AM   #131
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Who ya tryin' to kiss in ya pic? Stop, cause the girls ya pursue
Always put a seal to ya lips like the one ya jacked from the zoo

Maybe something like that? I think it could still be better...hmmm
 
Old 07-15-05, 11:24 AM   #132
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hahaha, shut up Daubs
 
Old 07-15-05, 11:24 AM   #133
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I like it, decent concept.
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Old 07-15-05, 11:27 AM   #134
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HE'S UP FOR HEAVYWEIGHT
decent wont cut it
but i like it too

how long u got to drop it?
might be able to add more to it
 
Old 07-15-05, 11:28 AM   #135
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Yeah I like it too, but I don't know if it's enough... prolly not assuming he tries

It's due at midnight just like around here so I got plenty of time though I have actually a total of 28 lines due tonight so I can't spend like hours on this lol
 
 


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