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Old 06-27-06, 04:49 PM   #121
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The cypher was going good, we were getting up and crunk
then you came and posted a verse .....and fucked it all up!
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You never throw heavyweight punches, more like untrained jabs.
untrained rhymes, you not even seen sick to the untrained eye!
Some emcees need help on structure, you have the whole catch.
you have a fucked up structure ......with the lines to match!
Every friend you spit a rhyme to said you wouldn't make it, right?
well, how does it feel now that you're proving them right?
Cause it's true, you're not nice with text, never be great with mics.
you're not sick in any kind of way, you can't even fake it right.
And let me remind you, cause I think you forgot to notice
we said your rhymes look nice in the trash, not posted!
Basics of a Good Emcee, thats what you should start learning about
so come back to the cypher and post ...after you've figured it out!
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Old 06-27-06, 04:53 PM   #122
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dawg, ur ripped her too hard..........
.............u almost caught ur panties in the process/
u the type of nigga to say a bitch ugly.......
.............but ud make love to her if she was topless/
and u a fag, I get head AND shoulders...
.............while ud just shribble up if u touch her some/
if u hopped in the pool,
.............ud probably shrink too much to recover from/

lol
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Old 06-27-06, 05:03 PM   #123
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Knight???
nah i aint takin it personnal dumb ass lol....smh

being a dentist is the only way you'll be in anybody's mouth kid
once they see your shriveled up dick you'll never get close to they lips
and you'll never go solo maybe one day you can be in a band
from the looks of it is seems like young joc is your number on fan
me being in ya bed papi...i really dont have a clue
cuz i can honestly say i would leave if i saw you in the nude
lookin at your shit imma speak truthful, i aint tryin to hurt you
only way your ass will be on the radio is for a geico commerical
now my advice is go ahead dog please stop and surrender
"I saved alot of money switching to Geico" is the only line you need to rememeber

muthfuck bye......i aint fuckin wit you...
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Old 06-27-06, 05:18 PM   #124
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i'm getting ganged up on in here....

unfulfilled is takin this personal and going out of turn
but you're right, you are hot....your wack verse made my eyes burn
once again your verse was focused on the same thing you always pick
but you're just yet another girl who can't stop thinkin about my dick
and that twit from lauderdale, i'd hate to call him a queer
he's played, think about it, the bible gets re done every year
and unfulfilled's ful filled with shit , pretending she's rips a ballad bruh
when ever year boys throw this bitch away like a calendar
and all i date is fat chicks, you're not serena or venus
plus i have too, girls like you are the size and weight of my penis
talk about rubbers, your dad had you and cut his dick in half
parents didn't want you, threw you away, no wonder this chick is trash
yea ya pic is out now, you're comin in last in the human race
so stop hidin your wack records and start hidin ya face
i guess i like fat chicks and the devil's starting to freeze
i'm datin you now cause that drops the biggest piece of ass i ever seen
and for your boyfriend, the lauderdale nigga, my drops the sun god
that ain't your name that's what your parents say when you speak, ahhh god.....
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Old 06-27-06, 05:41 PM   #125
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lol knights???

"she's going out of turn mommy, please make her quit"
sit yo bitch ass down and stop cryin like a lil bitch
its makin me sick....lol "another girl talkin about your dick"
nah i'm just another girl that just tryin to forget
you date serena and venus...thats a day you wont see
cuz i'm 100% sure they will run when they see you in they sheets
i'm tired of seein this bull shit you keep typin and thats a bet
tell me how hell gonna freeze over when you aint got there yet
speakin of parents ....lets get on yours...hmmm lets see
aint want to bruse your ego so they said the short bus was a SUV
damn i can't even imagine how your stupid ass look
before the next time you type up here...write it down in a note book
what is you lame ass fuck...are you just not hearin this
i label post number 125 off as a bunch of baby gebberish
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Old 06-27-06, 06:01 PM   #126
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too much confusion.......this is for UNfullfilled

dont worry knight, I'll thrash u both equally.......
.............................cuz unfull is just that/
cuz girl, I stop dropin bombs on u.........
............................probably as soon as u get ur chest back/
so dont spit replies till u sure u got ur mind right........
thats info that I lier gets/
I'll set ur fucking weave on fire and watch it burn.......
........thats the definition of u giving fire head/
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Old 06-27-06, 06:15 PM   #127
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you know what its like to hold fist fight an make moves
no seconds to lose so just chose and roll out with ya dudes
you probley dont, you probley wont ,
who you gonna pop without the chrome cuzzin?
only hammers u seen is on west coast custom
stop front'in ya boys get it jump like am going for a lay up
now a days u tell a nigga stay shut, an he wont till he get sparyed up
popp'in with ak's in the hoopdy gray truck, making sure every body get struck
stop it you aint buff u a ez put on like make up, this pussy think mase tuff
a flashy a dude cuz he wanna show off hes pienus
cuz a flash light the only flashy thing u seen with
when i cock back an spit fat joe single wont be the reason u lean bitch
i mean this, punchlines is meaningless, cuz i walked an took the Belt an ring bitch
am a Flaming hot spic thats u cant extinquish
an i can tell u a bum cuz patatoes the only thing that stay Crisp ..... ITS REX BITCH!!!
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Old 06-28-06, 04:08 PM   #128
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^^You wack ...should i even post, or should I just ignore em
and find something productive to partake in, on the forum?
Forget it ....I'll just crush 'em, to take time out of my day.
cause this won't really take long at all, anyway ...

so...

Look, I could mess up a bar and still rip up your whole verse.
I'm too great for you, your best doesn't even touch my worst!
We all know you're wack already, but a fact you dont know
you're the imposter of something that died millions of years ago!
^^Posting that, you need a hug, love, or some good parents
cause if I ever dropped anything close to that, I'd be embarrassed!
And you could've kept it a secret, but you chose to rap your bars
so now, you've just proved to the whole world how wack you are.
But to help you out, let me explain to you what the fact is:
Rapverse would appreciate you alot more if you were unactive!
See, that's easy, shouldn't have to be hard to accept
just stop posting here .....and you'll get a more respect!
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So this was just a little something for you to shut your trap
and not let the thought cross your mind to post a verse back.
You're messing up the cypher, everytime you even try
so do us all a favor, and please dont click on "Post Reply"!

- Thank You
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Old 06-29-06, 12:28 PM   #129
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wow.....that was hallmark quality and embarassing as fuck.
I dont mean the way u dissed him, I mean the fact u actually posted that stuff.
man change ur format. flyweights get over gimicked.
cuz I could type like u. but like a cinncinati licence plate, I wouldnt go no where wit it.
and quit writing long verses to each other, we already know roses are red.
u not that important, dont let more then rex' dick go to ur head.

short and simple. no long shit man.
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Old 06-29-06, 02:37 PM   #130
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You're demanding me to shorten my verse, I'll do it still
I'll start dropping 'short and simple' ...kinda like ya skills!
You can't rap, so why do you try and proceed with it?
quit wasting ya time posting. .
.....cause nobody's wasting their time reading it!
Ya need to quit ....and notice I said "wasting our time"
so even if we were reading it ...we don't take it to mind!
It's basically time, wasted when you think of a line
can't get inclined with sickness, so stop saying ya rhymes!
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Old 06-29-06, 06:13 PM   #131
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nigga think they superstar gangsta..... so bring ya ANR
watch me cocked back the auto rugar an get'em sleepin in they car
you swear ya hard like raw, aint a carpenter but i'll take apart ya jaw
lets take it to the park and brawl, or strap up like ya partner bra
i'll leave u Black an Blue like u took a job with the law
an when it comes to clips, i'll give u full bars like a cell phone call
i'll take ya husttlers grams, then wait till u an ya peoples scram
cuz u gets noting.. untill the Paper-Views like its on Demand
WOW... you aint the scholar you the kid who got out the school-sir
yeah am a big kid.... that'll fuck ya girl an BRAG ABOUT IT like YOU LOSER
Laugh in ya face, grabing the mase, stab him from the waist
clap him with eight, slash in ya race, an let ya White Meat drop like planet of the APP's
guess u planed it to be safe, an didnt expect to get drop like janet's waight
an if the gun jam's then wait, cuz the hawk i'll leave holes on ya like crates
how many times i gotta repeat this... YOU AINT FUCKING WITH ME
an for u am the Lucky Ticket.... only way u'll have the "Jack-Pot" if u cop'ed hes weed EZ!!!

chill fam...
an do us all a favor....
stop making me embarris you infront of all u'r friends it aint good for u man real talk....

its REX bitch what u wanna do huh??
its rex what u wanna do huh??
its rex what u wanna do huh?? hahaha fuck outta here...
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Old 06-29-06, 07:13 PM   #132
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What, you can't hear ..? Your rhymes need help, so stop the shit!
cause that verse aint embarrassing nobody. .
.....other than yourself for dropping it!
Oh yeah, today is 'Trash Day' for me, but I aint going no where.
why should I walk all the way to the trash can. .
.....when your post is right here!
Spit all the fake shit you can now, cause you dont have a future.
I can't stand just reading ya verses. .
.....I feel even worse for ya keyboard n computer!
Quit forcing your comp and keyboard to type them wack verses.
cause keep doing that ....your computer'll catch a virus on purpose!
And on the day ya computer dies, and you put it under the surface
I'd ask it "did you really wanna die from Rex's spit?". .
.....they'll say "Trust Me, It Was Worth It"!
Rex acting all non-chalant to his friends, like it aint true
but deep in his thoughts, he saying "Damn Faime, I Hate You!"
Rex thinking "I can't let my computer die, then I won't text no more
and without my computer, I won't ever have sex no more!"
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This bar here is stupid, I'm not gonna diss you, or even boast
I'll just let this bar be about nothing ...n say 'it describes ya post!'
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Old 06-30-06, 10:58 AM   #133
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are u for real? u lost half ur battles and u think u nice wit skillz? hell....
ur whole verse was just one good line...............
.............................that just kept repeating its self
so come hard like hefner in his younger phase.
I gotta a hundred ways to blow ur lungs to stains..........
...........................ur underdeveloped in RV, I'll give u growing pains........
cuz If Id ever try on this, u would probably quit rap completely.
and start head banging, not like rock kids at the mosh......
............................more like rock smokers between where the knees be......
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Old 07-01-06, 04:18 AM   #134
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U aint no words ah god cause god dont want to hear ya
a couple of quers and u are the only ones who feel ya
u have low flow and when it comes to punches no
basically u are..... a no talent ho
talking about winning battles u must be cheating
cause u so bad jon cena will throw u a beating
u live on rv but ur rapverse is wack
i would throw u back but u cant make the stack
ur prolly gonna try fronting but dont waste ya breath
cause ur wack rhymes are played out to death
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Old 07-01-06, 01:21 PM   #135
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u from kansas, them niggas dont rap man. u just picked a dead hobby
and u aint "cool like kool-aid", more like "cool like a dead body"
so understand u less then nothing, u dont exist to the heads
the epidemic begins when the last one stops, and that was about 5 minutes ago when I ripd off ur head
so explain ur self, why is ur verse so simple? rapping about queer shit
matter a fact...like ur bitch when u nutt too quick...I dont wanna hear it
so respect urself next time and think befor u post
cuz if u step in some shit, u leaving wit less then 10 toes
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