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Old 12-18-05, 07:39 PM   #13846
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yo


stay in this thread


i'm gonna post what I had
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Old 12-18-05, 07:48 PM   #13847
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The Road Less Traveled


The Surrounding

Dry air hurts the lungs, causing them to cave in and collapse..
No end it appears as you stride, hours fly by and days elapse..
Mild gust throwing sand into the already tortured eye..
Scraping legs open, wounds exposed and flesh eaten alive..
Buzzards hover over the area, watching your staggering steps..
For they are the peace keepers, and the bringers of death..
Shirt drenched in sweat, energy fleets as you creep further..
Decapitated skeletons laying, silent but yet screaming murder..

His Experience

I run fast, as the vast land surrounds, but nothing there..
Want to escape though I can barely breathe this air..
I'm dieing slow, pain setting in and i'm depleting..
Imperitive to find shelter, life gets shorter as day light is retreating..
Unknown horrors lurking, death surrounding the atmosphere..
Brittle skeletons of passers by that must have traveled here
The birds above, zoning in on my slightest moves..
Frightened for thine' life, cold sweat fills my every pore and groove..
To breathe it hurts, my nostrils burn from the scent of corosion..
Dripping sweat from this heat, yet i wont move as if i'm frozen..
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Old 12-18-05, 07:52 PM   #13848
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Nice Verse Fantom! but You were late.
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Old 12-19-05, 06:35 AM   #13849
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Wussup pplz? I be new to RV
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Old 12-19-05, 07:56 PM   #13850
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Old 12-20-05, 04:25 PM   #13851
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Quote:
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Nice Verse Fantom! but You were late.


yeah i know.... if you want you can keep your verse or redo it and we can set up another 1 just for fun and then see who would have won..



i'm up for it man!



i'd like to see a win in the stat column. Fuck that 0-1 because i had to go to work lol......
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Old 12-20-05, 04:31 PM   #13852
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Aight verse^^.....Anyways whadd up yall...
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Old 12-20-05, 04:37 PM   #13853
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yeah i didnt get to finish it....


how is it over there in da burg? its quiet out here near wal mart lol
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Old 12-20-05, 04:40 PM   #13854
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lol...damn...yeah manye...its always noise over here manye..lol..cuz i live on 13th Street you know thats the main section of the ghetto you know...lol..
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Old 12-20-05, 05:37 PM   #13855
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What bout 1st street and Allison Hill?
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Old 12-21-05, 01:20 PM   #13856
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Im Hangin With A Dead Thread

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Old 12-21-05, 02:26 PM   #13857
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They aight why what about them?
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Old 12-22-05, 07:55 PM   #13858
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Thought Allison Hill was the "Hood" of the "Hoods" in inner city
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Old 12-22-05, 08:03 PM   #13859
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It is....just 13th Street is always talked bout..I mean iam not trying to say oh iam gangsta iam a net thug or nothing like that...Just that i dont live on the brightest street in the world in all
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Old 12-23-05, 11:43 AM   #13860
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