Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-08-04 at 03:53 AM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

yo accept then drop your verse ok, no prewriting, 10 lines, no more no less, good luck

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INFALLIBLE has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-04-04 05:02 AM.

If you thinkin you hard, "ripu2shreds" like wet tissue//1
And like an orphan child, nobody's really goin miss you//2

Battle me if you want, bet you won't do it but once//3
Jeffery Domor type of flow, eat ya lyrics for lunch//4

I ain't gotta go hard when I battle this herb//5
Cause all I do is spit metaphors, nouns, and verbs//6

So do you really want beef, so you can lose ya front teeth//7
Hit ya peeps wit the heat, then wrap you up like lunch meat//8

So in close, this cat knows, that he can't fuck wit my flow//9
And he's so pussy, his verse just got ate like cunt hole//10


Aight son this is my first battle in like 2 months so I'm a little rusty, but I think I did aight tho. -1-


1)ripu2shreds, is an artist on RV
2)orphans don't have any living family
30he ain't gonna want ta battle me again after he loses to me in this one
4)Jeffery Domor killed, froze, and ate people
5,6,7)all self explainitory
8)lunch meat gets wrapped up in plastic bags
9)self explainitory
10)I ate his verse out

Aight honest votes people -1-

Phyzicks has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-05-04 11:49 PM.

(1) james bond, never say never, a movie

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yo uppin for some votes!

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Voted For: Phyzicks

damn this was a nice battle

INFALLIABLE - u had a decent verse..ur opener was good, but after that u fell off..ur flow and structure were ok. but no real personals or hard punches..ur closer was wack too..overall - 5.5/10

Phyzicks - nice verse..u had good use of vocab..some nice punches..i really liked ur opener cause it was clever and i hate bush..lol..ur flow was also good..and your closer was really creative and original..overall - 7/10

phyzicks won because he had more and better punches..

uppin for some votes!

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Voted For: Phyzicks

man physikz ate this kat he had flo structure punches but it is allways the same type of battle man change ur style,,,,, but still u won...

His verse flows less........ than a shallow pond or a cresent
His wins are reoccuring flukes, like everytime bush makes president
His Predictions are fine, some that the weather might have to borrow
his raps are unpredictably stormy....... like the day after tomorrow
^^^^^^^^^^ aight line
gudd punches but infallble ur gonna get merked

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thx... upiin for some votes people!

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Voted For: Phyzicks

His verse flows less........ than a shallow pond or a cresent
His wins are reoccuring flukes, like everytime bush makes president
^^^^nice opener from Phyzicks, he took this battle easily.
Phyzicks took this with the better punches, flow, vocab, and everything

INFALLABLE had some decent punches which didn't hit as hard, he fucked up his structure by making spaces between each bar, and the dashes in each line is a also no-no. He had screwed up structure which screws up the flow

none of yall have personals nor multies, but I'ma give this battle to Phyzicks, who had wayyyy harder hitting punches although some of his lines were stretched a bit

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uppin for some votes!

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