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Old 02-02-07, 12:17 PM   #1
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for an audio/ FEEDBACK. first audio in years

IP: ABEE BDCE

he's been murderin', killin' violently blood spillin'
an assasin', master minded, worlds greatest villain
shootin', blastin, cop slashin, in broad daylight
crushin, explodin', blowin' shit up, in plain sight
detective, effectively helpin', trackin' em' down
hidin', runnin' 'round, never seen, never found
where he at? where he gone? where he went
you think two gats dispersin, got his message sent?
well it did, he got half of america scared
he said: "you can try to kill me
but I got my body armor layerd"
you'll never pierce it, and you'll never stop my guns from blazin'
these eagles produce firece shit,
and i've been wreckless since my college days of hazin'
gun fire sprayin, too loud to hear what the police be sayin'
"drop the gun, and put your hands up"
they be prayin, endin' up in a puddle of blood, layin'
gang bangin', killin', stealin', and dope slangin'


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3140654
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Old 02-02-07, 05:15 PM   #2
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I cannot picture you flowing that to a beat at least not without being off beat
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Old 02-04-07, 12:20 AM   #3
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i have a good idea how i'm gonna flow it. and i've been expirementing with ways to spit it. and it can be rapped on beat, some parts in the text change tone in rap as you get to it. like faster, slower/ shit like that.

but,
i just hope it turns out well, thanks for the feed, and keep an eye out for the audio, i'll post it sometime soon hopefully.
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Old 02-26-07, 11:47 PM   #4
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pretty good shit. lots of multies and yes its flowable to alot of beats ive heard lately. so dont worry about it. just find a good beat round here and try with some of those... i like this piece.. good job
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Old 03-09-07, 12:05 AM   #5
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I THINK IF HAD A BETTER BEAT IT WOULD HAVE BEEN A WHOLE LOT BETTER, BUT I REALLY THIS LIKE KEEP IT UP GOOD JOBhttp://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239755........................
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