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Topic: Deepening Crevasse

Good Luck To The Both Of You.

It was the day after momie said watch the addiction
i woke up from a sunny day with a rainy complextion
tears falling from the percipitation and mediation
staying up that night injection watchin the television
toons seemed to follow migration beyond animation
mickey mouse grew damnation telling the imagination
"you fucked beyond prognation with no stagnation"
plutos bark was deafication till i noticed medication
doctor flashed in sayin "save patient" and erratication
my heart pumped the deprevation without oxidation
eyes looked like camp consentration without eradictation
the light came to observation and eyes began dilation
bamb bamb! electrication brought back physical education
parental with biblical meditation and crying over mediation
the classes and theraputation never worked on vacation
kid looked like he was asian playin my weak mind caucasion
flame to the spoon ignition the flame brought actual vision
"im sorry" beep goes respiration and heart elliptical equation
nerotic with body on vibration and foamin mouth like extracation
the holy water set agrivation for more heroin to seek succession
night a battle for hell fire nation the soul. mental, and physication
stroke to stroke bleedation and attack to attack vein clogation
nurse and staff in location until body went to steady arc patient
not stinkin thank biblication and my father for this life pray unison
this morning i start dedication and lay off needle to arm stabation
Crevasse peaked to ellivation and valley showed its erridation
showing a shadowed vission to what years of stupid addmiration
hope to never pave cementation or maybe end fire to cremation
the fire went to visual fortification please god keep the givin ration
i need guidance and forgive patient for death of son and arsonation
jail bar-ed mentally sentence vacation no palm tree just starvation
demon dead from deprivation but individual hoping for reservation

Journy wit me into a sector in the brain defined by rigorous glacial features,
Observe a childhood, that was deprived and regurgitated on by teachers and preachers,
Lets travel through the nervous system into the crevasse of the Cerebellum’s stories,
And find the earth shattering truth and pain a person keeps hidden beyond their glory…

At age 12, I first started sulking in the thoughts of the worthlessness of my life,
Twice, I wanted to exhibit the use that was newly found by me for the knife,
My life was rearranged, I allowed my internal feelings of the world to be emitted outside,
I was Gods yoyo, no matter how far I got I always returned to the beginning of my strife
I engulfed the hardships that life gave me as cronus once did to his childeren in mythology
3 horrid moments in my life, lined up consecuetivly togerther like orions belt in astrology
My life could in fact be one-third of the cause for the sudden downfall of the nation's economy
I look at the events that happened in my life chronologicly then it dawns on me of the irony
no later then when i found a higher power, Did my life take me hundreds of miles away from where it was found
This world wanted me to play the role as one of the children who were seen without the capability of sound
my life's been frigid and cold, so many stories that would straighten things out for me go untold,
they wanna take away the fact that im bold, but would rather see me grow old digging deeper into the hole
I took a look into chinese culture, i figured i might be able get things straight by listenin to what confucious said
then realized confucious couldnt imagin whats goin on in this world and he could help me since confucious was dead
the only thing thats even significant about me is how me and hitler share the same date of birth
one hundred years apart, both lives have done so much to burn and scorch the earth,
bloody, teardrops shows that my heart runs cold and that there are so many things that i fear not,
I know they want me destroyed because the only place that accepts me in this world is a beer spot,
Fathers an alcoholic slash pill popper who beats on his children just for the plain fuckin hell of it,
so im tellin u bastards how i feel, THIS IS MY LIFE, I AINT TRYIN TO SELL U SHIT
HALF YOU CATS PLAY ABOUT THIS TYPE OF LIFESTYLE PLAYIN JEDI MIND TRICKS ON YA LISTENERS
BUT IM THE PRODUCT OF TWO SICK ASS MINDS BEING HELD AS A PSYCOLOGICAL PRISONER
LIVIN IN A WARZONE OF MY OWN TERMS, I HAVE NO FUCKIN REASON TO MAKE THIS SHIT LONGTERM
READY TO FLIP AND KILL MY WHOLE FUCKIN SCHOOL IF SOMEONE SAYS THE WRONG WORDS
now do u see why i rap, this shit keeps me sane when my brain goes so far off the fuckin meter,
and no matter how hard i try to climb out the whole, the fuckin crevease keeps gettin deeper and deeper...
~Yung Duke~

Nice as verse hells fire and good luck to u too. if i lose, u deserver to win this tourny cause you been comin so close in the last couple.

Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10 because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches an the word play doing big things too,,,, yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1

Originally Posted by NarKotic Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating good story telling skills keep it up that shit was a 10/10