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05-15-05, 12:23 PM
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Odi et Amo
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Hells Fire vs Limited Edition
IP: 0E89 9DF2
Battles up Monday - Check In by Wednesday - Drop by Friday - Votes by Sunday No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa. All Battlers must vote on 4 other battles and leave their voting links in their battle thread. Battles voted on may be from either poetry or topical battles. Extensions must be asked for by Thursday night by pming any of the mods (Acuity, Drama Queen & Elementality). No extensions will be given 4 if asked 4 on Friday night. Extensions are only given till Sunday night at the most. Every battler must nominate (not their own) one topical and poetry battle for pieces of the week, in the main forum . People with pieces of the week shall have their drops stickied and placed in the Pieces Of Inspiration sub forum Topic: Crown of Thorns
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05-15-05, 12:46 PM
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Life is a Constant Battle
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IP: 9C9C 5833
check 1 2 check 1 2...this topic looks dope not sure which way ima go with it
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05-16-05, 02:38 PM
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L.E
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IP: 6022 FE6A
Check..........good luck..........
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05-19-05, 03:35 PM
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IP: 6022 FE6A
The crowd surrounds Him, He is taking the abuse, the pain... ...It's a shame, because half of them don't know His name... The sounds, the shouts...."Crucify" echoes in my head... ...I'm looking upon a man who in a few hours will be dead... The blood trickles down His face, deep crevasses and gashes... ...His head taking damage as people toss, throw dirt and ashes... I just want to go out to Him, save Him from this painful scorn... ...As I move forward, a Roman soldier twists a branch of thorns... It is shaped into a crown, and it is put...pushed into place... ...A cry...a yelp...a scream of horror, as blood runs down His face... The smell so strong, I taste, I feel the agony and the torment... ...A crack of the nine tails...it's like being attacked by raging hornets... All I can do is grimace, groan at the look of the man's expression... ...People are getting bored, the cries die, nobody is at attention... Until the march starts, the man carries His death upon His shoulders... ...It feels like years, decades, centuries...but the our is only half over... All of a sudden I experience the pain from the object, the thorny crown... ...I walk over to the man, just as He puts his cross before me on the ground... "You, pick that up!" A Roman soldier points and glares, stares at me... ...I do without questioning, it's heavy, How could He bare it when He's weak..? I follow the red-robed man, my thoughts are His, I can feel the essence... ...The presence of something Holy, the presence of purity, no repentance... I snap awake as a tomato flies by my head, and hits the man in the back... ...I turn around, wanting to snap, because the man did not deserve that... I begin to think again, a man who has healed so many, brought so much with Him... ...I don't understand completely, it just shows the faults of this Roman system... We reach the top of the mountain, the man is nailed to the cross torn to pieces... ...I realize now, the Crown of Thorns is the Crown of God...this man was Jesus... |
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05-21-05, 05:12 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 46C2 FF91
Closed due to opponent not showing
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