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02-12-04, 10:50 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Me Be Different
IP: EC0B 84C7
Me Be Different
If I'm part of the human race, I won't run in this race This campaign of pain won't pass wind past my face I won't ever even place because I won't ever make it I'll dissapate in this place before I ever take it Before I take a place I'll clean it off, I've seen enough I'm not tough enough to keep my place in good taste But what is really good taste if I can't taste my tongue If you could taste my tongue for me how's it taste? Hold all these emotions swiftly in a brief case A brief case of emotional damage god dammit I planned it Not to be the way it is but I lost the race so I hand it A new olive branch to branch off a wing of a bird But the hospital wing was built over burial grounds of the bird And I realize I won't ever fly again Not that I could, I could not So I bother not to finish a race, I never leave the starting block I could not, ever understand the wind upon her knees Like she was satisfying the flying aerial trainies As we jump off the top rope do we get such pleasure? But not me, I only get pleasure when I land On this land that we built, free of the home, land of the brave I realized I'm just an outdustrial commercialized slave To advertise the lives that we've all gotta pay But the dues I lose when I used the fuse to say Shock me, say something halfway decently intelligemental I've gone mental in a storm of words thrown torrential Like storms, but I'm not a nigress goddess of weather I'm only a man and in his hand a peice of leather For love aint forever, and I aint for whoever And I aint gonna be ever staying together with you Whoever you may think you are to bring wind to her knees To get eaten out worse than my flesh with fleas But I'm like a flea even though they eating me I'm still insignificant and I jump really far Does that make them cannibals or are they going too far? How many more thoughts can I provoke for you to see? But not me, can never be seemed, ever be gleamed It's too easy to learn to hate, but forget me not So I took the thought and ripped it apart at the seam So it means that I could never ever remember it not Never ever remember the spot Seven upwards and to the right or wrong directions These lessons I learned are like bricks to the head They hurt, But I won't ever let it show Mostly cause I like it, also they would know And they may teach me but I will never let them learn If they learn of my pain once again I shall burn I'm sick of the fire And you won't ever tell me different Don't make me be different. Make me be different. Me be different. Things lost in translation. What about Don'tness? |
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02-15-04, 08:58 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 2A8C 115D
ok...well ive been replyin to pieces all night that have 0 responses....and so far all have been really short...but this isnt and i cant for the life of me understand why its getting slept on....
the rhyme scheme u had flow'd nicely...kept the piece on top an usually rhyme comes out sounding forced an ish, but u did a great job of keep in it real i seriously have to many lines to quote but this stood out to me the most: But I'm like a flea even though they eating me I'm still insignificant and I jump really far Does that make them cannibals or are they going too far? How many more thoughts can I provoke for you to see? good ish...hope to read mo from u return the fav plz
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