Stuff Going On #1

From a magnificent block need keys for different locks
Some doors won’t open galore are broken drama don’t stop
This is a disaster G without a master key so I’m unprotected
With a fun flow rejected locked out the block clout neglected
So my piece of work will be feasted on my jerks I’m standing bold
Demanding scrolls a skill rap mechanic cats thrill on crap romantic
And perhaps panic real stuff hit their ears sink like the Titanic
Like a trooper use wise means to supervise schemes and antics
Look I be free living as degrees are given me from college because
I have some knowledge and take complex looks at textbook and pause
On some chapters about rappers doe some are so ill and dim
Like lil Kim didn’t understand the fury of lying to a grand Jury now stem
With jail time and prevail behind bars but mange to rip Foxxy Brown
Before all this I still believe she got a jiggy baby from being Biggy’s Lady
Somewhere hid out like Janet Jackson’s child in romantic action wild and crazy
It thrill me to know Lil E which is Easy E’S son is bringing back NWA
In all this trouble today double to say this is cool the world is befuddle anyway
So its proper to say doctor DRE is a rap author to stay Ice Cube and Yo Yo
Is gonna go loco on this, even Queen Lativah may become a mean Diva for show
I try for peace but TYRESE is making it difficult by becoming a rapper and
Singer just chapters of a smoke bringer on the album one side singing
The other rapping at the club swinging lovers clapping DJ slinging
Hits for real yo, so TYRESE is gonna let the facts fly with the rapper name
BLACK TY with these acts try get stardom by making chapters flame

2 bars from solo would destroy a thousand of yours
learn proper sentence structure n use punctuation
when you write, cuz as of now your as fuckin wack as sinner

naw that mean you're whack just like i said hell did you say puntuations marks in a flow HA! HA! HA! HA!

i would destroy you in any catagory regarding rap...
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daz

You are an ass if you think those things mean something.

Yeah... but he's Daz. Anyways... this isn't the best open mic... no doubt... 6/10

your working your way up...

rtf...

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dumbfuck, they would help his syllable counts so peeps might understand
his concepts better.... your so fuckin arogant to call me an ass.....

Sllyable counts?
Shut up...
U know nothing about RAP...
All you know is text.
If you ever used a pen,instead of a keyboard to write verses..
then you would fucking know that "proper sentence structure n punctuation" don't mean shit..
You fucking suck.If you don't understand this guy's writing style...then fuck off.
Don't go telling him to change his whole fucking style and shit..

And calling you an ass is nothing to do wit arogance...
So bassically...
your so fucking stupid to call me arragont

Well... this is text not audio.

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It's all supposed to be rap regardless.

And besides...you are ALWAYS supposed to write your songs in a way you could spit in real life...

youve been owned by everyone that has a inch of talent
wanna get merked, we can battle, otherwise stfu

I've been wanting a battle
. since the day I first posted in that cypher........kiddo

so yea..set it up.

Thanks Fo Rthe Props On This One For Real It Took A Lots Of Courage

my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showt...993#post2520993)