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Old 05-04-04, 07:49 PM   #1
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juss 10 lines i will make it longer dont wrry.


i wrote this to JAY-Z's the TAKE OVER.

Miles ahead of half you niggas juss COUNT-DA-DISTANCE//
And wen I retire imam settle down at MT.-OLYMPUS//
But for now I’m trying like the JOHN McCLAIN of HIP HOP//
Aiming for big shots// ficses in microwaves is da only way u’d make ya SHIT HOT//
You pricks, stop// cuz not every CASE-can-be-CLOSED//
And I roll with niggas who’s holsta reaches from they WAIST-to-they-TOES//
Take my advice and watch yo mouth nigga I juss hope you relax//
Cuz I kno u kno, every phone can be tapped, and codes can be cracked//
I run it, I rip it,// I’ve done it you witnessed//
Spit nothing but sickness// you want this come get this//

gimme some feedback yall
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why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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Old 05-04-04, 07:58 PM   #2
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shit was good...very nice....no complaints...u came hard with it....u spat wht was on ur heart it sounds like so thats what makes it hott....
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Old 05-04-04, 08:42 PM   #3
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Thats Some Good Shit Man!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 05-04-04, 09:41 PM   #4
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im feelin that big upps
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Old 05-05-04, 03:50 PM   #5
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yo thanks for the feedback so far yall and i would like some more holla back at ya boi.....

come on
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Old 05-06-04, 12:41 PM   #6
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i need more feedback yall come on
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Old 05-06-04, 01:00 PM   #7
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yeah that's wus up partna i'm feelin it
Put sum lenght on it and dat shit will be fire.
It's wit it tho good shit
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Old 05-06-04, 04:28 PM   #8
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i liked it.....u had some nice flow and some good creativity......big ups........keep writing
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Old 05-06-04, 04:34 PM   #9
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wow, dat is well gd lol, i aint no expert at all dis rap battlin but dat was amazin
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Old 05-06-04, 08:07 PM   #10
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thanks for the feedback but i want more.
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Old 05-06-04, 08:31 PM   #11
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The take over...nigga ya breaks over...god emcee me jay hova....lol, sorry i had the song in my head and shit, but ya verse was hot, stay up!!!!!!!!
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Old 05-07-04, 03:48 PM   #12
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i need more feedback. drop a link on ur open mic and i'll holla back.
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame//
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Old 05-09-04, 06:36 PM   #13
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yo gimme some feedback yall....
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame//
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Old 05-09-04, 06:39 PM   #14
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123259
you are good man, your rhymes are Smooth, and good Vocab, only thing is some verses too long
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Old 05-09-04, 08:06 PM   #15
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Identity2k
juss 10 lines i will make it longer dont wrry.


i wrote this to JAY-Z's the TAKE OVER.

Miles ahead of half you niggas juss COUNT-DA-DISTANCE//
And wen I retire imam settle down at MT.-OLYMPUS//
But for now I’m trying like the JOHN McCLAIN of HIP HOP//
Aiming for big shots// ficses in microwaves is da only way u’d make ya SHIT HOT//
You pricks, stop// cuz not every CASE-can-be-CLOSED//
And I roll with niggas who’s holsta reaches from they WAIST-to-they-TOES//
Take my advice and watch yo mouth nigga I juss hope you relax//
Cuz I kno u kno, every phone can be tapped, and codes can be cracked//
I run it, I rip it,// I’ve done it you witnessed//
Spit nothing but sickness// you want this come get this//

gimme some feedback yall

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