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Old 12-11-08, 12:15 PM   #1
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My contest track unfinished

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http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7139086
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leave some feed so i can fix it before i submit it.
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the link is updated, the tracks finished
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Old 12-11-08, 12:35 PM   #2
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I can't get into it, but I really hate that beat to begin with so I can't really criticize.
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Old 12-11-08, 12:58 PM   #3
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well, its the best of the three beats i think. i could spit the same lyrics on any of the beats, but i thought this was the best one.
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Old 12-11-08, 02:28 PM   #4
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I dug the first beat the most I think.
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Old 12-11-08, 07:27 PM   #5
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oh.. the worst of the 3 beats...

Umm.. i dunno man, not really digging it...

Doesent really sound like a winner......
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Old 12-11-08, 10:50 PM   #6
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Just to be completely honest, I dont think you're gonna win with that.
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Old 12-12-08, 06:34 AM   #7
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its funny you say that big P

i happen to hate the things that i hate.
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Old 12-12-08, 02:38 PM   #8
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rofl, this is the kid that wants me to battle him? weak as fuck.
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Old 12-14-08, 08:29 PM   #9
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rofl, this is the kid that wants me to battle him? weak as fuck.

then why u keep duckin homo, i've had my track done for you for over a week now
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Old 12-14-08, 08:30 PM   #10
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its funny you say that big P

i happen to hate the things that i hate.

you should never hate.
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Old 12-14-08, 08:41 PM   #11
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i hate all the fucking time its in my blood you fucking loser fuck you.
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Old 12-14-08, 08:47 PM   #12
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well thats too bad
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Old 12-14-08, 08:48 PM   #13
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then why u keep duckin homo, i've had my track done for you for over a week now

Hope it doesent sound like your submission track in this thread...
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Old 12-14-08, 08:52 PM   #14
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Hope it doesent sound like your submission track in this thread...

if he ever battles me we'll all find out
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Old 12-14-08, 09:22 PM   #15
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rofl, this is the kid that wants me to battle him? weak as fuck.




rofl

that is hands down the most ironic post i've seen on R/V in a while
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