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Old 12-05-05, 05:20 PM   #1
Bonafide
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i kno i cant be a 'doctor' cuz i aint got no 'patience'
sittin still waitin aint really my thing i need to have a station
control the nation from everywhere underwater like a crustacean
u facin one of the worst cuz my guns burst at any location
dont get lost in translation i'll whip u like we on a plantation
u my slave better work cuz there aint no vacations
such a temptation to beat ur ass til u have complications
my expectation is that u work without conversations
dont rest and look at constellations or we'll have decorations
of ur body hangin from some of the applications
so many fustrations so hot like im eat somethin thats cajun
there some implication that ur imitating my population
i take offense to that there will now be no hesitations
from my inclinations to kill all of ur inspirations
no restorations of ur respirations now i have determinations
killin u so much that now i gotta make reservations
blowin u up makin evacuations happen with decapitations
of communications configuration u need authorization
to have nice accommodations and a manifestation
my organization has recommendations of public relations

quick freestyle im so bored

Last edited by Bonafide : 12-06-05 at 02:49 PM.
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Old 01-01-06, 07:05 PM   #2
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umm..... iight flow and rhyme scheme, but absolutely no topic, more like a battle.... and even then the punches weren't on point..... the best part was the slave thing cuz it was the most consistant...... sort of a Cass jump-off, like that my interpretation.... if ur gonna get into that, u gotta make sure ur punches are hard or funny, and u gotta step up ur voc. and make sure u use words in the right context.... i remember u from TTI, stay up playa, ur gettin better.......
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Old 01-01-06, 08:21 PM   #3
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this piece wasnt my best i was real bored so i just threw something together real quick, really no thought to it, just tryin to up my vocab and shit like that. But thanks any way. If u wanna see something better of mine u should read Runnin'. U dont have to critique it or anything like that, but its up to u. Link's in my sig.
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