RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > Instrumental releases
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 07-21-04, 07:11 PM   #1
Crossword
yawn
 
Posts: 1,882
Joined: Feb 2004
From: cNY
Status: Offline
first rap beat.

IP: 06D4 9403

this is my first ever rap beat. was a big change from making dance music.
Hi
Lo
It is only the idea of the beat, and about 1 minute something... Feedback please.
__________________

do your research.


Send a message via AIM to Crossword Send a message via Yahoo to Crossword   Reply With Quote
Old 07-21-04, 08:19 PM   #2
Restricted
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
Restricted's Avatar
 
Posts: 3,774
Joined: Feb 2004
From: Pittsburgh, PA
Status: Offline
Text Record: 59-10
Audio Record: 1-1
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: E5EB 11E6



.::Aight Check It::.

its aight...your trying to switch it up too much....it was enjoying bassline....but the thing in the back was annoying..

Um...you coulda made it hot...like use that intro....but turn the bassline into a sick ass like bump bump bump bump (kinda fast) then have it be like (mid tempo) bump bump ...bump bump....than have chorus bump bump bump kinda fast

No idea if that helps I am no beat maker but thats how it registers in my head...

NIce for first time just keep up with ya shit

~R~
  Reply With Quote
Old 07-22-04, 01:57 AM   #3
Tempa
~Cursed With Illness~
 
Tempa's Avatar
 
Posts: 1,319
Joined: Jun 2004
From: Barrel Of Tha Gun
Status: Offline
IP: 0FBE A6ED

Jea that wasn't bad for ya first beat. I was gonna post my first beat on here but it sounded like shit LOL. You made that wit Fruity Loops didn't you. Uhh the constant for tha back round was missing to make it complete....like when you beatbox there's tha humming. Need to feel it in but not bad.
~I.T.~
Send a message via AIM to Tempa Send a message via MSN to Tempa Send a message via Yahoo to Tempa   Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 04:47 AM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.