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Old 07-15-03, 02:50 AM   #1
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Exclamation if u view..reply damnit...Ghetto DeSserT

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this some shit i wrote cause im shippin off the equipment tomorow and am going to be waiting insanely for my pro tools setup to come so......... enjoy

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Old 07-15-03, 02:40 PM   #2
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Beat Is Pretty dope ..

Flow Is Pretty Good, Content Pretty good, Emotion Pretty Good, Delivery Is Good..

Overall Good Track .
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Old 07-15-03, 08:40 PM   #3
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Listenin...Beat Is Dope...Lyrics Are Good...Emotion Is Good...Flowing Well...Done Well...Nice...Pz...
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Old 07-16-03, 02:19 PM   #4
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Old 07-17-03, 10:51 PM   #5
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Old 07-18-03, 12:04 AM   #6
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yo that was good like the gun slingers bet...I heard it on the charts.

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Old 07-18-03, 02:05 PM   #7
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nah i aint down for a crew
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Old 07-19-03, 06:08 PM   #8
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i like it man...its so fucked...ive listened to 3 underground artists in a row and u all sound the same...thats a 1st. Nice flow..ILL BEAT!!
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Old 07-21-03, 11:43 AM   #9
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Old 07-21-03, 12:26 PM   #10
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really feelin' the beat... "nice" flow.. lol, a little short, but was still on point..
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Old 07-23-03, 02:44 AM   #11
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Since you say your offline and ish I'ma treat you like you was a rapper trying to get a fanbase.

THe beat is nice that's always a good thing BUT your delivery is shakey and for a emcee that does shows and drops radio edits that's a no no. Make better useage of your adlibs; this can make or break a track.
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