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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

Mystic Chaos-Hmm.U DID elevate since our battle.I'll give you that.In terms of depth 'n profoundness in your lyrics.U got it.But honestly,in terms of captivating 'n enjoyment...it wuz on the weaker side.Didn't seem to have much of a storyline with a twist or anything.And as for your flow...some bars flowed due to internals 'n shit.But for the most part..over a beat..this would be hard to flow too.

So all in all....make your lines a lil shorter.And make the content more interesting.

But for the most part...good shit.
Overall-8.0

Barr-Well...you got flow.But..when you got short lines..flow is easy to come by.But..the words you rhymes..they were elementary.U rhymed you/true/blue...like/night/nice/right...c'mon.Wtf is that?Build yourself a decent vocab.I think you have wat it is you wanna say...but damn...you need to know how to word lyrics up.And wording lyrics is not something that I can tell you to do.That shit comes from experience.

Overall-6

Vote-Mystic Chaos.

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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

AIi This Is What Me Think

Barr

You Dropped Really Creative and I Like To See that in a topical But Yet Its Like You depended all On Creatvity and I cant give you a win based on one area of the battle I have to vote vased overall on this battle ......I think you couldve did jus a little but more better on your wording but it was not to sly of chosing in this battle jus try to up it jus alil more next time ......and if your gonna give some other details in a topical maybe on somethin relating but not on the same topic try not to sway to far away from the topic/subject shall I say I really think you have some really good style man I really enjoyed reading your verse I think that me and you should Collab sometimes in the future but anyway next time try to even out your verse in all areas if you can

Nice drop

Mystic Chaos

Your drop wasnt to simplistic yet it wasnt to difficult and I really Really liked that it made me feel like I was the writer lol But yeah I feel that you can use a little bit more advancement in the Wording area as well although it is not the key of winning the battle it is and important factor in helping to win battles so yea and your imagery was terrific and you stayed on topic you stuck it and made it clear to voters and you didnt stuff Big words together in one line jus to seem intellegent so yeah i liked that

so My V/ Goes to Mystic Chaos

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