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10 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-01-04 at 05:15 PM

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*lyrical madnes* has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-04 04:46 PM.

Limited Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-04 04:46 PM.

yo ill put ur face in shit thats my 1st hit get ur shit kit
get ur ass outta here go nit ya shit ur like a boy with a tit

man u cant rap ur wack n crap weres ya rap man ur fuckin crap
man i bet u so stupied u cant read a map u homo u tap(ed)

man u lyk jack n jil when my rhyms hit u ull be falin down w/out a pen
man my ryhmes ill man u need a rappin pill to beat me u like a gay hen

man u hoe man u like a gal named moe so poor with no doe
u need a life ill slice u wit my knife until u say "im a hoe"

dam u wanker man u fat u define the word of tanker
man im am da banker with tha money yes u gonna get killed wanker

Oh my God...I thought you would be better than THAT...what a waste of my time...uppin' for votes...

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Voted For: Limited Edition

yo ill put ur face in shit thats my 1st hit get ur shit kit
get ur ass outta here go nit ya shit ur like a boy with a tit
^ Um...........whack punch'

man u cant rap ur wack n crap weres ya rap man ur fuckin crap
man i bet u so stupied u cant read a map u homo u tap(ed)
^ You rhymed rap and crap twice? Completly horrible

man u lyk jack n jil when my rhyms hit u ull be falin down w/out a pen
man my ryhmes ill man u need a rappin pill to beat me u like a gay hen
^ Ridiculously bad, no punch here

man u hoe man u like a gal named moe so poor with no doe
u need a life ill slice u wit my knife until u say "im a hoe"
^ Whack punch again

dam u wanker man u fat u define the word of tanker
man im am da banker with tha money yes u gonna get killed wanker
^ You rhymed wanker twice............whack


Now for Limited

I walk in the room...Madness shouts...I splatter ya spleen...
The darkened gloom...just with one punch I shatter ya dream
^ Kinda a weak opener

You just better drink some gin...because you ain' gonna win...
It's a sin, but I will let both of those things sink into your skin
^ Again, not too strong

Turn up ya treble, dawg you can't fuck wit me, I'ma rebel...
Flesh of Devil, wacker than me only puts you on a higher level
^ Not really a punch

That's the way it is, sadly, but I will merk you wit ease gladly..
Like ya avy, to beat me, you never wanted somethin' so badly
^ Nice personal

I'm only bein' reasonable, but you see I am undefeatable...

I accomplished something here...

...I DESTROYED "Unbeatable"...
^ SICK closer



Overall, Limited just had much much better punches. Lyrical couldn't hope to stand up to it



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omg wot ever i do never gose right i get told to strech my bars that dont work got told to use loads of ryhmes words that didnt work wots fuckn next

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Voted For: Limited Edition

limited won hands down (no hate), he bussed ass, he had great ounches and he had betta flo and his verse made more sense, vote limited, we should face each otha dawg

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Voted For: Limited Edition

lol @ you eatin herbs.........
*claps* :|
......................peace lol

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oops
that was meant for feedback.....
my badd lol..

not like it matters

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A'ight thanks...uppin' for votes.

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Voted For: Limited Edition

easy battle to call................

Ltd. Edition......u came good, flow was on, structure was near perfect. punches were gud, some cud have been better but overall they were hittin solid. wordplay was aight, complex rhymin.....well it wasn't too complex but not too basic. multis were there to, gud shit. pointers are to just up ure wordplay and get more creative. ure opener was aight, closer was a lot better. overall 7/10

lyrical madness......u came weak man, the flow and structure were about the only decent things about ure verse. i mean punches were weak, a lot of played out shit, and what is with all the "man" at the start of ure lines, drop it cuz its just classed as filler. rhymin was pasic as hell, need to get more complex shit, and get some wordplay. personals, were there any, i cudn't see any. multis were there, but they were weak as hell. basically up ure game, and battle ppl on ure level until u do. overall 5/10.

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