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02-05-06, 08:09 PM
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"You Scared" By Black City
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[V:1] i gotta love for tha game and i cant contain it its like i spit it formally, it dont need explainin it like dat rap fans catchin my drift, they needed a shift from all tha crappy tracks dat they considerin hip i considered a dip and went under tha ranks but goin under only made me have to choose my fate it was either, live or die, homie swim or drown so i chose tha good and put whateva else was bad down i cant lose, it aint in my competitive blood so on dis track, imma reach sumthin more than tha hood cuz dont no one group fiend, tha othas do too so on dis beat im exposin tha truth knockin tha wheels off tha booth loose, rollin down rythym killin ya settle feelins so get up and pay full attention cuz dis time, b city gone shine and dispose of these wack cats tryin to take mines [hook] imma playboi, but im major as hell you gotta problem wit me but nigga i cant tell (you scared) i can see it in ya eyes (you scared) i can see it in ya eyes imma playboi, but im major as hell you gotta problem wit me but nigga i cant tell (you scared) i can see it in ya eyes (you scared) i can see it in ya eyes [V:2] i bet you in da past life i'd be past trife im strong enuff to break ya jaw witta fake knife even my name right, cuz it fits my description im in da city plus im blacker than zits on jessica simpson im prone to become more unknown spittin star wars flows, compare me to a drone put me alone in my own category of rap so i can spit hot fiya straight back to back im on anotha level and i aint talkin bout how tall i am repeat myself like mike jones and killa cam cock tha uzi of civilizations while kickin tha devil beatin hatas down wit shevels and dont get in trouble blast tha ratchet, knock down trash and get at it blank expression on my face and disgrace to tha fattest losin weight from my belly got tha girlies lookin as i look back as im likin and im lookin [hook] imma playboi, but im major as hell you gotta problem wit me but nigga i cant tell (you scared) i can see it in ya eyes (you scared) i can see it in ya eyes [V:3] i had a dream like MLK back in tha day like 0-3 dat wit rap i would make a difference in da industry a lot of people feelin me, maybe cuz i got cash one call away from a whip, and a step from a bus pass i want money fast cuz my mind is on my cash nasty on tha mic so i dont jus spit, i pass gas pass tha hash from one stupid fiend to tha next dont do drugs but you'll swear i do when im at yo neck major material will get respect and i'll make sure dat our legacy live on like we tupac shakur thoughts locked on gettin more, nuthin below dat flows stacked like ally cats on top of a ally rat we do it back to back like tha bad boy movies same people, more bread, more knowledge, more groupies keep it locked like a pair of vice grips and you can hate if you want, either way we make hits [hook] imma playboi, but im major as hell you gotta problem wit me but nigga i cant tell (you scared) i can see it in ya eyes (you scared) i can see it in ya eyes ***dis track has also been recorded...its on my soundclick page...im only lettin yall know cuz i know it looks wack typed out...bump da record and read along, then drop comments...link in sig...easy*** http://community.rapverse.com/showp...235&postcount=9 http://community.rapverse.com/showp...232&postcount=9
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02-05-06, 08:27 PM
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The story goes. Bill, B.
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Damn son welcome back. lol Thisshit does look decent on text but listening it flows raw and shit. I loved it.
i want money fast cuz my mind is on my cash nasty on tha mic so i dont jus spit, i pass gas Raw ass bar son. 8.5/10 We gotta get at it son. Wordness.
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02-05-06, 09:46 PM
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IP:
good lookin LFS...bump
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02-06-06, 04:53 AM
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IP:
nah this wernt wak at all, gud use of multi's which ran smoothly, catchy str8 to point hook, didnt go outta topik, formal structure,gud use of volcab
yep...uppin this for a 8.9 keep elevatin |
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02-06-06, 05:31 PM
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IP:
thanx for da feeds...bumppity bump bumppin dis
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02-08-06, 05:12 PM
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IP:
bump bump bumppin
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02-08-06, 05:47 PM
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Fuck White Folks
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IP:
wasnt feelin the hook, but it made sense, had credibility. the verse were good. i like the flow. bumped with it a little. i stumbled a few, but for the most part the bars hit well. punched hard, came good. decent read man.....ill look for yours again...
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02-09-06, 02:01 PM
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IP:
good looks fam...bump
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02-09-06, 11:12 PM
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Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP:
it was pretty good nice flow and good multies but like po it said i wasn't really into the hook that much, but keep at it homie........
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02-10-06, 12:59 AM
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New to RV
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IP:
da hookz fyre yo... sum of that rulin tha streets shit
enjoyed dis but im feelin like da verses need a lil more life style... gnaw-mean Ü |
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02-10-06, 11:22 AM
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IP:
thanx yall...bumppy
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02-10-06, 11:44 AM
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IP:
like everyon else has said the multis were decent... there were parts of this that were proorly worded though, kinda through the flow off in those parts... lyrically you got your message across... the hook isn't really a banger... overall this was a decent track though postin' ya verses centered make ya structure look on point... it's still clearly off... other than that... keep doing ya thing... 1
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02-10-06, 04:24 PM
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IP:
yer yer this was pretty dope. aint sure if im feelin the hook, but ya flow and multis were nice. you got ya point across well aswell. good job yo
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02-10-06, 04:28 PM
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IP:
Yo mad props on yer verse wasn't feelin' tha hook though, good multi's also.
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02-10-06, 07:11 PM
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IP:
thanx yall...bump
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