checkin in....Top 10 herre I come

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King of Saint Lou

good luck Grams.....

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King of Saint Lou

yea whatever.......ill go 10-12

lines i take is whatt yourr sayingg......

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King of Saint Lou

^rofl...

You can't be serious dude, your shits wack and mad played
and by the way you act, its obvious you've never been laid
you couldn't make the grade........if you paid off your teachers
they'd take your money, laugh, and let bullies steal your sneakers
and after this beatin' there won't be a reason to cry,G..
cause after you read this you'll feel dumb...................
..............fuck it, I'll just explain with a smiley

Me against you puts me on GOD status, nail your face to a steeple
so just pray all you want............................
cause your not making the top 10 if there were only 9 people
so while I take home bitches from bars, skinny and FAT chicks
you can hang with your Next Gen Niggaz and slap dicks.

Grams ill blow you out like a Candle, Bettin on your Victory is nott a good Gamble,
Bc erre body says MM (MoneyMaker)…Good like I was a can of Cambell’s after I leave ya in Shambles.

This nigga are Fagg as much as he hangs with the Jakes,
Kinda like a stray mark on a page time to erase this Mistake.

Imma take you to war pussy so strap up ya life is over,
Disect ya into pieces pray thatt your lucky Mr. Fourr-Leaf Cloverr.

Nigga is a straight LightWeight compared to me the ‘Fool is a Spec’,
Nigga stepping up to the plate like BaseBall…the only time this ‘Tool is On Deck’!

Ya dropps aint tight…look at ya…just a LightWeight Rapperr forr real,
Bc you caint spit Golden Grahams/Grams so keep tryna get ya POSTs good like Cereal.

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King of Saint Lou

Me against you puts me on GOD status, nail your face to a steeple
so just pray all you want............................
cause your not making the top 10 if there were only 9 people

VS.

NOTHING.


And now Money.. you need to realise that when I say you have NOTHING.. that means you have nothing worth mentioning. Your verse was weak and you are still stretching shit too much. You are forcing your rhymes and wordplay in places and your punches are worded shit. I don't mean to be a hateful motherfucker.. but you need to elevate your shit if you wanna hang with the decent battlers.
Grams.. your verse was weak also, I found only one bar that was decent. The concepts you had were pretty cool but sadly weak wording let you down in most places. That Top 10 bar though was pretty RAW.. better wording could've made it even better.. but it was still nice.

V/ - grams

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Nothing

Vs.

Nothing


Really there was nothin in this battle worthe qouting to me but if I had to decide on who actually is the better Textcee then it would be Grams seeing as that he hadf some alright attempts and Nice try at originality but didnt quit make it there while moneymaker was back in 02 year of rappin so

my v/ Grams

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One Love

*Bridging The Rap*

Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

good looks yall........and yea, i know my wording is my let down......that was a quick key tho too..........vote up.......
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grams

and after this beatin' there won't be a reason to cry,G..
cause after you read this you'll feel dumb...................
..............fuck it, I'll just explain with a smiley

Me against you puts me on GOD status, nail your face to a steeple
so just pray all you want............................
cause your not making the top 10 if there were only 9 people

this battle wasn't good...grams came errrr...moneymaker i wasn't feeling ur verse or style...the space between is not a good style...grams had lil more punch in this battle

vote-grams

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3WST.

Me against you puts me on GOD status, nail your face to a steeple
so just pray all you want............................
cause your not making the top 10 if there were only 9 people

vs.

Nothing

Golden Grams idea was cool MoneyMaker, but u executed it poorly. Honestly you just aren't ready to compete here, your new at this and need some practice. Your whole style is really played, corny, and not effective. Grams, you came really basic based on your opponent.. almost didn't have enough to win, but the line I quoted was enough to take this.

Vote - Grams

Noting

VS

Nothing

Vote.......Grams

I guesss the Top ten line was Enuff to win but I'm not quoting it, It was just better than N.E thing Money had. You both need to get your weight up. I mean this was a horrible read. Too much gayness for me. One guy usin Lil (Happy/Sad) face symbols and the other niggga Actually compared Himself to Cambells Soup and thought it was a diss to the Other guy, WTF Man? Are you guys serious? I didn't see none of the basics, Nothing Even almost creative, Nonthing Hardcore Graphically Violent, Nothing funny or witty, from either cat. You guys gotta throw more personals about the other guy in your raps To make lines hit harder, do some research on your Opponent since punchlines seem to be a problem for both you guys. That way you'll still have something effective If the punches don't go over too well. insult sigs, diss the other guy's style or something just basically do the opposite of what you guys did in THIS battle and ya'll might be alright later on down the road.

Me against you puts me on GOD status, nail your face to a steeple
so just pray all you want............................
cause your not making the top 10 if there were only 9 people

vs. nothing


seemed like grams half assed, but he still took this easy.

v/ Grams.