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12-03-06, 12:54 PM | #1 | |||||
Houdini
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No hope for these niggas
IP: 1604 9994
You should have thought twice, before handing me this device
Cuz only life has answers, Its all in a roll-a-dice God had trouble writing your death,So he handed me the pen You call these weaks your crew, More like Vulnerable men I'm choppin the legs off this drama, Call me the King of "Ground-beef" I get in niggas heads like thoughts,What you know about me? I compare rapverse to cheating women, Always seem to be fuckin around I'm in the game,So why ya gotta be duckin me now...Clown Yall never seen whackness Till I introduced it Niggas dont even stare at me, They dont want to do shit Understand me man,I'm here to claim my throne Death is solo..so nigga you gotta face this alone I'm only bein misused, Got your hoes blowin on me like a box-of-tissues Tell me the issue,Fuck around with me pussy and u'll wind-up-fish-food Step back, Contents are explosive dude Its whack, cuz theres nothing left 4 u hoes 2 do Look at me and these keys I am texting I'ma hard ass, look in the mirrors my reflection Bringing it back spinning whack rhymes and imagination In still its back wit past times and frustrations I clip shots at these whack cats trying 2 get there cut out This industrys like the wrong door..so stay the fuck out Ima be the man in this industry.. Be the only white man to go down in black history Cut your hands off leaving you waveless..wit no hands 2 say grace with My punch is like a bass hit,extreme so I waste kids Hearing all this chatter about who's on top now... Havent you heard bigger they are the harder they fall down I own this mic..so my spits are infectious THe game wont kill me but, my shit is gonna getcha The streets on fire...Cuz my lyrics is hot IM on top..n its funny...cuz the resta you not
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12-03-06, 12:58 PM | #2 | |||||
Houdini
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IP: 1604 9994
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234974
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235023
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12-06-06, 01:44 AM | #3 | |||||
Houdini
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blah
IP: D7A9 EFCB
uppin this bitch
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12-06-06, 11:20 AM | #4 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 33E3 44D7
nice Opener... seem more like a battle verse to me... but still niceness all that way through... dont know who you dissin but I really dont give a fuck....
8.9/10
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12-23-06, 09:51 PM | #5 | |||||
Houdini
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uppin this
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
I need some response... Uppin
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12-25-06, 04:24 PM | #6 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 83DC D46E
Hot shit man, It kept me reading till the end. Thats the type of shit I like to see.
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01-17-07, 02:50 PM | #7 | ||||||
why so serious!!??
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IP: 2020 96DE
the punches are dope as hell "the only white man to go down in black history month" lmao one of the best lines in there..anyways structure made it real easy ta read and u had some dope wordplay no kindegardon shit so congragualations..flow was good it defitnly was on point with every line..dunno if this is a subliminal diss to someone or if it was just made up for the punches either way its really good..id put this in the hall of fame of december but i aint gonna dig up all the open mics made in december and all that shit but oh well it was hot...make one this month just as hot and it'll be in the new hall of fame for january of 2007 fo sho
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01-17-07, 08:16 PM | #8 | ||||||
New Jack
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IP: 7EAF 257F
i think you have potential i give it a 7.5
because it seemed like on every line started off nice but got weaker..give me feed on my open mic When you see me wiley-d |
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01-20-07, 12:22 PM | #9 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: ED94 FF0C
pretty simple structure to this but kept me reading
coulda done with some more original bragging material, instead of the taking the crown, im on top etc white person to go down in black history was sick, more of that woulda made this iller pretty simple rhyming too, could use some more multies and whatnot to speed the drop up play with your complexity and scheme anyways keep at it |
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