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Old 11-24-07, 01:40 PM   #1
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Originally Posted by Darkmanner
lemme guess you're talking about your pen or pencil

if you're gonna try be smart and use metaphors be more creative and slightly more ambiguous with your approach


this is the way i deliver my lyrics so with all due respect, keep your negativity to yourself
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Old 11-24-07, 01:46 PM   #2
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this is the way i deliver my lyrics so with all due respect, keep your negativity to yourself


are you stupid i gave you constructive criticism ie up you ambiguity to make the piece deeper

if you only want dickriding feedback then tough shit you aint gettin none from here...u acting like i hurt your feelings n shit...act on criticisms wisely
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Old 11-24-07, 04:15 PM   #3
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blood please do not get into something thaat you cant free yourself from, bkuz on this sight you cant tell hating from love, so forgive my ignorance or fuck you.

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unless your a female then i don't need you to ride my dick.
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Old 11-25-07, 12:45 PM   #4
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blood please do not get into something thaat you cant free yourself from, bkuz on this sight you cant tell hating from love, so forgive my ignorance or fuck you.

p.s.
unless your a female then i don't need you to ride my dick.


i aint showin no love and i aint hating trust me you would know about it if i was hating...

and explain your first sentence
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