last one was pretty good but there's no need for "" and () we understand what ur trying to say.

aight..jus makin sure..and method... we can do a little punch line battle type shit if u wanna say that... haha w.e will make ya shut up :-)
so am i gunna be put on the list or no man?

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sorry Kriptic, not yet. First clean up ya style, get rid of the quotes and slashes. Then, work on ya punchlines. Read some of the top ranked heads in the LBL to see what I'm looking for.

Elevate a bit and sign in later in the season and you should be good to go.

MiSk, why ain't ya in the LBL? But you're in

YEA!!!!! sign me up mofos!!!!!

Yeah aight, I'm in.

This is lookin DOPE...

Sign me up

sign me in dis bitch

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^^he's scared.lol

i put the dashes an shit there to let ya no what words i was usin ont he wordplay thing....but w.e man,, i did em all at the same time in like 2 minutes....ive been readin all the past battles for this thing....and im suprised 80% of these kids are in..if u wont take wut i wrote down that quick...but w.e ha

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Well seeing as you keep moaning about why you aint getting in and such i thought id break in down for you

see,im too quick & you too slow-
like swingin' if you was in shoulda height water
cuz ill leave ya 'Face-down',like i left tails face-up on a quarter

thats self-praise your saing "i" do shit, which aint dissing at your oppenent which is what a whole verse is suppose to do


an when you see me comin you betta -movie it-dude-
cuz i been known ta re-arrange a face like -arubic's-cube-

again self-praise,

an i send caution- cuz when i stunt it'll make ya show-hate
& if ya come at me son
ill leave ya wit more -cuts- then a 'paper snowflake'

again self-praise

& i no ya jokin bout the gun in ya raps,thats why im laughin' after-em
cuz the only pistol(piss-stall) you've seens in ya public -bathroom

not self praise, but concepts not all that, saying i aint seen a pistol? the word plays good but its not harsh at all, try and aim your punches at your oppenent and then im sure datrus will let you in one day,

Peace

seeing as how i dont care...and i didnt ask for your opion? you just wasted ur time

first one- sayin our two slow..and i was showing that witht he water..so it was aimed

second one- tell ya to not get in my way..and why not...so its aimed

third one- saying if u come at me....blahblah...so yeah

fourth one- i liked it..so idc what ya say? aha


and over all...go back an look t the battles from the past in this league.......and tell me that there all ebtter...b/c 80% are not....liek i said....

peace

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oh..and i had no oponent to aim them at....if u didnt notice.....so u cant say 'ehy there not aimed at the oponent.' fucking retard. lol

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no to Marvjay...sorry man, tough decision, but I think you need to elevate a bit more before I can let you in here. If your start winning in the LBL over the next month try out again and I'll let you in.

damn. I never seen some one actually get rejected before from these things. I never even done a 1 2 punch cypher much less a battle composed completely from and I still got askd to come in. wow Marv....just....wow.....

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..