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Old 07-22-07, 04:50 PM   #1
JWILD
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Valentino...
"Valentino's gutta, still fuckin them big chicks.
Don't be mad cuz I smoke'n'still gotta big dick
Not a pedophile, But I'm giving u kids Big licks
Not a skater, but I'll get a fucker kick flipped"
^ Hot
Clova
"As u can see i dont alwayz rhyme to the flead,
but my lyrics are so true, my words will fill u wit lead"
^ not your best...good metaphor needs punchline...maybe somethin like "my mouth is the barrel the whole gun is my head." but I understand you were just shedding rhymes as quickly as they came out your head, keepin it real and there's always respect for that.
also...
"So thats it im done, go ahead and shout,
P.S. Dont fuck wit 300 J.G. or we'll knock u the fuck out"
^ Hot, especially when I reread and stressed the "fuck"s.

K-M
"im pushing for higher lyrical circumstances.....
...... like God pushing ocean waters to flood countries
im not a serpant persuading adam and eve.....
....... but i could influence your brains anatomy
to shift gears and be lifted in fear.....
....... instead of getting yourself in pain for challenging me"
^ Awesome. Extended meta with a good "anatomy"/"challenging me" multi.
overall this was a hot keystyle!
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Old 07-23-07, 07:29 PM   #2
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Valentino's shit was funny i like the flow on it and evrything!
Clova mane ur shit flowed jus right, that last two lines hit hard!
K-M i like ur style basically it fits u well!
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Old 07-24-07, 03:28 PM   #3
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This shit was tight ya'll all got skills!
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