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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-20-04 at 12:21 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

INFALLIBLE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 11:54 PM.

insane16 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 11:57 PM.

drunken style nigga... gimme ur rolls, gimme ur gol, gimme all the money u hold
don't like 2 think so I drink heavy, dump slugs out the Chevy livin armed and deadly
I'm takin chunks from punks who want funk, treat em' like 15's..what?..put em' in da trunk, I split spleens, making sure all my shits clean
a nigga swing like a wolverine & scheme in the scene wit a mean gangsta lean
out the window hit your block corner, everybody better duck!, burnin tires like the Daytona Tucku Up it ain't nuttin, pushin buttons, blowin smoke @ them bustaz.....

see I was justa...baby when I first got "Sick", got the braids,the blades,& alcohol, I'm bout 2 hit they wall with this syphalis "dick", just gimme kicks... & trix get chopped up like cold cuts, heat em' up blocks get rocked up like that coke stuff
I ain't no jokester,prankster, real gangster, Shit! I'm that nigga! & if u around its like "The Season of the Sick", I admit that it was my tightest shit...BESIDES THIS!!!
don't get me wrong if this song is a hit...Guess who did this!
My nigga MAYHEM y them suckaz ain't pay em' right, y ain't we stayin tight, peelin open ziplock bags errynight, And my momma never fed me right!WE WAS BROKE
and I'm off that Olde E u kno me I AIN'T NO MUTHA FUCKIN JOKE!when it come 2 rippin shit...ziplock bodybag toetag I leave your T-shirt bleddy(bloody)N E where N E time u ready
drunken style nigga!

insane drop punch lines that shatta skulls and shake knees/
and my whole crew big bodied wit big gats and tall tees/
we all white to cuz u aint gotta be black to rap/
and im the 1 in the shadows plannin to whipe u off da map/
i always win~that fact is truly IN~FAL~I~BLE/
u contest my skills yet they~ un fukin COM~PAR~A~BLE/
im the fukin champ completely uncontested/
and a white kid on top is a problem thats comonly protested/
i eat ya little verses cuz they easily digested/
this fukin fagget kid is wasten all the time hes invested/
we all kno u crushed but u still oblivious/
i fit in the rap game u copletely indigenous/

(indigenous means dont belong....out of place)

that was some hott shyt u deserve to win dis kid....i jus aint been able to spit lately...that was hott props to dat kid............my shyt was wack as hell i jus cant spit lately i cant get my mind on the game..........

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uppin 4 votes come on cuz I need this shit right here!!!!!!

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I SPIT FLAMES//BEAT NIGGAZ LIKE RICK JAMES//FORGET AIM//CAUSE LIKE POSI-TRACTION I GRIP THINGS
PSA TAKIN OVER!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: insane16

opener - Infall, Insanes was so wack
closer - Insane, Infalls was messed up
punches - Infall, hittin harder
personals - Insane, for actually throwing in 1 personal
vocab - Insane, infalls werent as elevated
structure - insane, infalls was straight up horrible
multies - Neither, wanst feelin any
metas - Neither, again, wasnt feelin any

Infall did NOT get my vote because of the worst structured verse ever...not only that but lack of multies, metas, personals and vocab...elevate in those areas.

Insane, you GOT my vote because of great structure, good vocab, and good personals. Good job...Elevate your punches a bit...

Please return the favor with an honest vote as I have done for both of you... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...126#post1512126

iight thynx dawg lets keep dis shyt goin uppin for more votes...........................

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Voted For: INFALLIBLE

although your structure was off a bit, i liked your verse because of the flow of it, i can tell because of how it would sound spitted, i liked your punches and your wordplay, this was a good drop man, i liked the closer as well,
i voted for you because of the personal style you put into this

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thnx 4 da v, still uppin!!!!

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I SPIT FLAMES//BEAT NIGGAZ LIKE RICK JAMES//FORGET AIM//CAUSE LIKE POSI-TRACTION I GRIP THINGS
PSA TAKIN OVER!!!!!!!!!!!

still uppin 4 votes c'mon this cat even says I got this shit

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I SPIT FLAMES//BEAT NIGGAZ LIKE RICK JAMES//FORGET AIM//CAUSE LIKE POSI-TRACTION I GRIP THINGS
PSA TAKIN OVER!!!!!!!!!!!

iight uppin for more voters.............................

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