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in.........14 lines sound good?

yeh, in........

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We aint evenly matched dawg, plus u gotta name thaz meant for jokes
so we cant go neck and neck...cuz yours is already against the ropes
wit tremendous quotes, i'm endin ya like a savage in battle
n while i'm airin out MCs, u jus air out bullshit like flatulent cattle
leave this amatuer rattled--i'm a true MC, uncanny wit the punch
but this pussy's knot...simply cuz he's got his panties in a bunch
bitch u lose too much, u'll jus git burned in my wake
wit slabs of beef,
..............i'ma beat sense into u, so u can learn from mistakes
dude cant even land a decent meta, he says fuck the symbolism
n it's ironic, how he falls apart cuz of constructive criticism
dude's fake on the net, i hope peeps dont think this dummy's a god
cuz he's really the type of nerd that gits slapped tryna study abroad
i'm jus tryna say that u aint shit son, u only came ta' front
n face it, u a pussy--ya better of changin ya last name ta' Hunt

*there's some kinda wordplay in each bar...pay attention*

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quote your own damn lyrics...

dope lines

Mike Hawk:
Nobody know's who you are, good thing you dont oftenly speak
I'm usually the cause of kontraverzy, you just lose to em every week

^ ROFL LMFAO nice shyt hahaha

Most champs fight dirty, you jus got them rings from around ya tub

LOL another crazy line

Bring ya crew here, and see more rappers robbed than the allstar game

dayum^ lol


Kwell:
but this pussy's knot...simply cuz he's got his panties in a bunch

lmfao DOPE ^

n while i'm airin out MCs, u jus air out bullshit like flatulent cattle


Lmfao dope

dayum this was a very close battle.

but il have to give this too...

Mike Hawk...because he had better wordplay......

and cuz the kontroverzy line was dope haha

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[note]the guy above me does not even know how to quote a line[/note]

We aint evenly matched dawg, plus u gotta name thaz meant for jokes
so we cant go neck and neck...cuz yours is already against the ropes
kay
wit tremendous quotes, i'm endin ya like a savage in battle
n while i'm airin out MCs, u jus air out bullshit like flatulent cattle
meh metaphore
leave this amatuer rattled--i'm a true MC, uncanny wit the punch
but this pussy's knot...simply cuz he's got his panties in a bunch
kay
bitch u lose too much, u'll jus git burned in my wake
wit slabs of beef,
..............i'ma beat sense into u, so u can learn from mistakes
nope
dude cant even land a decent meta, he says fuck the symbolism
n it's ironic, how he falls apart cuz of constructive criticism
seen this flipped 10x better..sorry
dude's fake on the net, i hope peeps dont think this dummy's a god
cuz he's really the type of nerd that gits slapped tryna study abroad
good
i'm jus tryna say that u aint shit son, u only came ta' front
n face it, u a pussy--ya better of changin ya last name ta' Hunt
nope

*there's some kinda wordplay in each bar...pay attention*
if its good wordplay it'll be obvious hence the fact you shouldn't have to point it out...btw are you the Kwel that posts on 411?



Why won't y'all sit back and watch me clown this whore
He's the type to move the crowd...right back out the door
kay
Nobody know's who you are, good thing you dont oftenly speak
I'm usually the cause of kontraverzy, you just lose to em every week
nice
I smile and shrug, when my niggas hit you wit the slugs
Most champs fight dirty, you jus got them rings from around ya tub
ehh
Ya rhymes like sex, you want an example look.
Its not that ya ass...you jus like to beat around the bush
oldass
You know Im a thug, I keeps the heat, ready to spit them flames
Bring ya crew here, and see more rappers robbed than the allstar game
meh
Everyone knows that i'm > than you, if he didnt, glad to enlightin em
this was slim victory, only cuz of the font im writin in
c'mon now
Stop the fuckin act we got 2 battles, ill put a end to this name
hand u 2 'l's this week........like the end of ya name
wording off,par punch

Close call.

Vote Kwell

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& Guerilla Black is dope?Ain't nothin` less true
fucker wanna be B.I.G. so bad, hope he gets shot ta death too

infinitum
the whorage never ends

This was a very, very, very close battle. I thought both MCs came with some nice punches, but it seemed to me that Kwell's just came off more vicious than Mike's did. THis should definately be the battle of the week and I think we got some top punches of the week in here too.......nice fucking battle to both

Vote - Kwell

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boht yall had a good battle... honestly, i never expected to see something this good on RV . lol. ever. but, kwell outdid you mike, even tho i luh you more. . hell, kwell could do well in LLL with a tiny bit of elevation..

We aint evenly matched dawg, plus u gotta name thaz meant for jokes
so we cant go neck and neck...cuz yours is already against the ropes
bit played. alright.

wit tremendous quotes, i'm endin ya like a savage in battle
n while i'm airin out MCs, u jus air out bullshit like flatulent cattle
good try .. above average.

leave this amatuer rattled--i'm a true MC, uncanny wit the punch
but this pussy's knot...simply cuz he's got his panties in a bunch
nah.

bitch u lose too much, u'll jus git burned in my wake
wit slabs of beef,
..............i'ma beat sense into u, so u can learn from mistakes
nah

dude cant even land a decent meta, he says fuck the symbolism
n it's ironic, how he falls apart cuz of constructive criticism
good . i like this a lot.

dude's fake on the net, i hope peeps dont think this dummy's a god
cuz he's really the type of nerd that gits slapped tryna study abroad
good...again.

i'm jus tryna say that u aint

kwell, with the wit u have u'd do well in LLL. you'd have to practice a little more to be top notchm but im sure you'll get there quickly.

mike -
Why won't y'all sit back and watch me clown this whore
He's the type to move the crowd...right back out the door
little played, nice tho

Nobody know's who you are, good thing you dont oftenly speak
I'm usually the cause of kontraverzy, you just lose to em every week
nah - seen this type of thing many times, replaced with different names and different phrases , like one against "TheBar" would be worded "im usually at the bar u just lose to em every week" etc..

I smile and shrug, when my niggas hit you wit the slugs
Most champs fight dirty, you jus got them rings from around ya tub
nah

Ya rhymes like sex, you want an example look.
Its not that ya ass...you jus like to beat around the bush

ok..

You know Im a thug, I keeps the heat, ready to spit them flames
Bring ya crew here, and see more rappers robbed than the allstar game
coo
Everyone knows that i'm > than you, if he didnt, glad to enlightin em
this was slim victory, only cuz of the font im writin in
ehhh .. the font annoyed me.
Stop the fuckin act we got 2 battles, ill put a end to this name
hand u 2 'l's this week........like the end of ya name
not a very good comparison, sure its true but... not witty or interesting.

v/ kwell

vote: Kwell


simply because of consistency....... flow through out.... punches and broader vocab.... Mike had some ill lines..... but choppy choppy flow... i've seen you drop better.... even when you dropped that no show verse wit me a couple weeks ago.... elevate son..... that kontroverzy line was dope though..... lol......


-ez-

v/ kwell

by miles. . wordplay was pretty good. . emulated was wack, mad played an generally wack.

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v/ kwell

reasons:

mike hawks verse was ok but not that great it was good as kwell

so V/ kwell