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Old 04-05-05, 05:00 PM   #121
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Old 04-05-05, 09:50 PM   #122
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Old 04-06-05, 02:53 AM   #123
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Old 04-06-05, 11:10 AM   #124
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Old 04-06-05, 02:47 PM   #125
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Decent battle

Kesse:
Your punches started off good, but then got worse and worse as you went along. Your personal was decent, and your wordplay was ok. Work on some multis and getting wittier wordplay in there. You did a lot of stating and not a lot of punches in the end. Closer was weak, don't EVER say you beat someone because that is a fake personal. Work on using less fake personals.

Escolayde:
This is one of the worst verses I've seen from you. Structure was messed up, flow was bad, and your punches and metas were bad. Your personals were bad as well. Not that creative either, gay punches? Come on man you are better than that. Your wording was bad as well. Work on better punches, personals, and wordplay.

Overall, decent battle, but nothing that new or exciting. You both need to work on consistancy and wordplay.

v/Kesse
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