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..kontroverzey.. 5 83.33%
Wrecker 1 16.67%
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Old 10-14-04, 12:30 PM   #1
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..kontroverzey.. vs Wrecker

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5 Bars/10 lines..
no gay votes.. (d/r, crew, etc.)
g'd luck..


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Old 10-14-04, 12:45 PM   #2
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..kontroverzey.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 12:45 PM.
 
Old 10-14-04, 12:55 PM   #3
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Wrecker has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 12:55 PM.
 
Old 10-14-04, 01:02 PM   #4
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my biggest idol, you'd be blessed if i slapped your face
& its like yu recylce in every battle, coz all yur bars are waste
a true disgrace, while i sit here gracefully slashin ya.
& make ya ride two shotguns at once, like overweight passengers.
never known to take it easy, but i think you've had enuff.
coz it's known that you culdn't pick up ya bars at a weightlifting club.
your wack, c'mon admit it, just face it man.
coz yu couldn't mix bucks & banks if yu were a g-unit fan
come to your hometown, and locally blast yur set.
& em named his new single in memory of yu- coz yu're just loosin it
 
Old 10-14-04, 01:15 PM   #5
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This kids preys for newbs, cause he knows without them he'd be 0-8..
back when he bit me he had halle berry as his wife,
..after i left he had Michael jackson as his play-mate..
Kid decided to feed "20" birds, and still couldn't "break bread"..
Winnin? please, your full of shit like ya grandpa's bed..
Face it, only reason you battled me is cause you thought i was a newb..
Spit nines, after this battle, only thing you gon' be spittin is through tubes..
Dammit, Wack and Wrecker have more identical matches then twins..
You couldn't hip-hop your way to victory even if i shot off your left shin..
Shove your vocal chords up ya ass so everyone can see how full of shit wrecker be..
bitch is in a freestyle battle, and he said "just a second g"

*writes down some lines*
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Old 10-16-04, 09:14 PM   #6
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Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

lmao..this was another funny batle...

Kon: damn man, ur verse was funny as hell..especially da micheal jackson wun..hahaha

kon's score:
flow: 8/10 pretty good flow..
Structure: 8/10 iight, ur structure was kinda off wit the micahel jackson..but dat verse made the structure not matter lol..
Punch: 9/10..made me laugh as hell..
personal: 0/10..blah

25/40

Wreck: man, u really gotta work on ur punch..everything was nyce but ur punch pushed u down..n plz use personals..y dn't pppl use dat nemore?

wrecker's score:

flow:you had a good flow so..yea u got a 9/10
Structure:Your structure was good..so another 9/10
punch:ur punches were very weak..so 6/10
personal: blah 0/10

total:24/30

vote: kon
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Old 10-17-04, 12:32 AM   #7
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Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

ok kontro had better flow and disses structure was better as was flow also vocab strong a 7/10
wrecker you called him your idol?huh?why?punches were decent but not as good structure was kinda off here which hurt you and some punches aint fall right a bad flow hurt them badly and thats why you lost no hate just a honest vote5/10
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Old 10-17-04, 12:58 AM   #8
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...Kontrroverzey… Verse
This kids preys for newbs, cause he knows without them he'd be 0-8..
back when he bit me he had halle berry as his wife,
..after i left he had Michael jackson as his play-mate..
nice
Kid decided to feed "20" birds, and still couldn't "break bread"..
Winnin? please, your full of shit like ya grandpa's bed..
lol…nice shit hea
Face it, only reason you battled me is cause you thought i was a newb..
Spit nines, after this battle, only thing you gon' be spittin is through tubes..
nice 1 again
Dammit, Wack and Wrecker have more identical matches then twins..
You couldn't hip-hop your way to victory even if i shot off your left shin..
good shit
Shove your vocal chords up ya ass so everyone can see how full of shit wrecker be..
bitch is in a freestyle battle, and he said "just a second g"
good closer

Wrecker’s Verse
my biggest idol, you'd be blessed if i slapped your face
& its like yu recylce in every battle, coz all yur bars are waste
kidna good openor
a true disgrace, while i sit here gracefully slashin ya.
& make ya ride two shotguns at once, like overweight passengers.
okay
never known to take it easy, but i think you've had enuff.
coz it's known that you culdn't pick up ya bars at a weightlifting club.
nice..
your wack, c'mon admit it, just face it man.
coz yu couldn't mix bucks & banks if yu were a g-unit fan
boooo…..no
come to your hometown, and locally blast yur set.
& em named his new single in memory of yu- coz yu're just loosin it
weak closer
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Old 10-17-04, 01:28 AM   #9
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tru dat....uppin......................................
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Old 10-17-04, 02:03 AM   #10
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This was feedback posted for Wrecker

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checking votes for the EFL voting game...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155573
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Old 10-17-04, 04:15 AM   #11
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don't know how long this battle been up but you reppin the definition now and ya need to step it up a pace... i hope you was playing around with this...lol
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Old 10-17-04, 09:38 AM   #12
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lol ^ .......hopefully............wrecker........uppin ill rtf
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Old 10-17-04, 02:53 PM   #13
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Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

Weak battle from both....

Wrecker.....your structure was bad..flow was fair...your lines were ummm...I am at a lose for words...what was that?....american idol incorparted in ya lines are u serious?....ya closer didn't even rhyme, couldn't pick up a bar at a weightlifting club?....NO!!!that was terrible..I am being blantly honest becuz if I lie to u an say this was decent you won't get better seriously elevate.

KOntro.............much more polished verse...but not much stronger but your flow was ok, structure was fair...punches were fair, personals were fair...you had a blah verse but it had some substance every line rhymed....just overall better but notihing great.

Vote: kontro
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Old 10-17-04, 06:07 PM   #14
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Voted For: Wrecker

Wrecker:
my biggest idol, you'd be blessed if i slapped your face
& its like yu recylce in every battle, coz all yur bars are waste
Aight opener, punch was ok, nothing special 3/5
a true disgrace, while i sit here gracefully slashin ya.
& make ya ride two shotguns at once, like overweight passengers.
Set up was weak, and the punch was wack, fuck gunplay 1.5/5
never known to take it easy, but i think you've had enuff.
coz it's known that you culdn't pick up ya bars at a weightlifting club.
Punch wasn't hard, didn't even really connect, 1.5/5
your wack, c'mon admit it, just face it man.
coz yu couldn't mix bucks & banks if yu were a g-unit fan
Another weak punch, no connection, 1/5
come to your hometown, and locally blast yur set.
& em named his new single in memory of yu- coz yu're just loosin it
Didn't even rhyme, 0.5/5
Total: 7.5/25

Kontroversy:
This kids preys for newbs, cause he knows without them he'd be 0-8..
back when he bit me he had halle berry as his wife...after i left he had Michael jackson as his play-mate..
Wack opener, punch was stretched and didn't connect, 0.5/5
Kid decided to feed "20" birds, and still couldn't "break bread"..
Winnin? please, your full of shit like ya grandpa's bed..
Punch was aight, set up was weak, 2/5
Face it, only reason you battled me is cause you thought i was a newb..
Spit nines, after this battle, only thing you gon' be spittin is through tubes..
Gunplay, punch wasn't hard, 1/5
Dammit, Wack and Wrecker have more identical matches then twins..
You couldn't hip-hop your way to victory even if i shot off your left shin..
Nah...0.5/5
Shove your vocal chords up ya ass so everyone can see how full of shit wrecker be..
bitch is in a freestyle battle, and he said "just a second g"
Bad closer, punch didn't connect, 0.5/5
Total: 4/25

Winner: Wrecker, with just an overall better verse, but you kids need to stay out of EFL. No hate, just elevate...a lot. And return the vote to a link in my sig, honest explained votes only...
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Old 10-17-04, 08:05 PM   #15
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ok...

one sided...

Wrecker

your Verse I give a 7/10

you had some good wordplay
but the inslts about money need ta go
the garbage line was coo but been used
times before...focus on punches and don't let
wordplay and punches be one in the same

[b]Kontroverzy[/b[]


wordplay was PRetty good 8.3/10

punches hit hard and most connected
structure was iight/good

and flow was consistant

fav line was the closer

My vote goes to you

peep my open mic niggas lol

peace iight battle
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