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04-30-06, 06:13 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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Black Dragon - Pressure
IP: D107 9F23
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227367
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=227326 ---------------------------------------- www.myspace.com/blackdragonsic ^^should automatically play 'preciate any feedback........... pz ~1~
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04-30-06, 07:44 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
ight lyrics are pretty good...quality is straing...you need to work on flow and delivery...its like you dont feel what your sayin...your just sayin it, and for a point your were a smidge off beat...your hook is ight....your verses are slackin...not totally bad tho...step it up keep on uppin ya game....thanks for the feed by the way....not bad keep it up
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04-30-06, 08:18 PM
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IP: 2029 97B3
flow:7...its kinda robotic... not flowin..recitin.. u know
lyrics: 8.... wuld sound better if flow was right.... chorus:7...it was aight!!....... beat:9...nice hip hop beat yo!!! song overall:7.......more emotion and flow more |
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05-01-06, 03:15 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: D107 9F23
'preciate da feedback..............
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05-06-06, 11:19 AM
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El Padrino
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IP: 0EB4 1ACC
Beat:... i like that joint... i remember it... but i cant recall where from...
any way... your lyrics is good man... now what you need to do... is like... Remember them shits... and spit them a million times before you go to record... this ways you can get funky wit the way you say em to a beat... you can play wit your delivery better .. the more you know your rhyme.... cuz your delivery needs a lil uppin... other than that... your flow is right... take a dose of Confidence... and dont hold back on the mic kid... your elavating... keep droppin.... RTF -Don Tito Bronsky
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05-07-06, 07:16 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: D107 9F23
'preciate da feed Tito.............o yea tha beat is Xzibit's Paparazzi.........
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