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I'll rip a chump niggas jaw off,
Go upside his head with the sawed off
n knock this bitch top off
fuck the stacks, i'll break this niggas legs back
hold his head to the train track
n hear the crack when the train makes contact
fuck the stash, never found in the trash,
i cut his eyes out n his skull get mashed,
he would hope it was a dream n Freddy got his ass,
n fuck the money, ill laugh like its funny
when the chainsaw get from his head to his tummy
unrecognizable like a real life crash test dummy
Fuck the fame, i got wild cats thats less than untamed
instincts thats less than sane, fuck hannibals game,
we the sick fucks that'll BBQ ya brain,
n fuck the word on the street,
i don't like the heat, but i like ta beef,
i like pliers when they like your teeth,
i like flies when they like ya meat,
i like when they still alive n they try ta breath,
i like ta cut the lungs open n watch the air seep,
thats my treat,
n fuck the respect, fuck a death threat,
fuck the fear that u think i get,
fear fears me, did u not read, what u think i meant?
in case u still poppin off at the lips,
i use my hands i dont like the clips,
yall some dumb bastards,
this was full preperation for ur closed casket
its best to adapt to it,
your fate can not be prevented, im attached to it,
n don't think im that stupid,
n don't think that that's just mad music,
bring ya crew,
but don't think that the magazines not attached to the magnums gleam, with the infared beam,
im on ya neighbors roof,
n from this close a distance the
sniper rifle will take a liking to you,
cadillac floats like a boat loaded with a viking crew,
n we all twisted off that potent brew,
n through this scope i got a nice view of you,
fuck nigga, i been that buck nigga,
tried to retire my trigga finger,
but like ridin a bike that's one thing that u don't forget,
im smarter than this bitch,
my life is one thing that i won't let slip
Im spammin slugs, u should check the sale,
ask for 1 get 2 free, catch'em when u check the mail,
I'm leavin niggas catchin hell,
Ya mom's won't make it ta check ya bail,
For extra laughs i drop the steel,
but u got as much chance as an ice cude in hell,
Get dropped in a black bag have ya dad sheddin tears,
My rocks colored yellow like Miller Beer,
N im not talkin in my Cartier,
Im gettin snow like the alpine,
You just a small tyme, stuck with nicks n dimes,
Im on a hard grind, givin ya bitch a hard time,
Got u stuck on hold when im on the line,
My name stays on her mind like all the time,
your girl get the pipe, u get the nine,
im droppin nine out of nine, out a nine,
around nine o' nine, bitch niggas pay the price,
this ain't Milton Bradley, no roll of dice,
i worked for this money that pays the bills,
my house like a bitch it sits on high heels,
my cars like match box, yea them some hotwheels,
songs about my Cadi, they wanna see the grill,
real recognize real, recognize the skill,
fiends acceptin buys, recognize a deal,
n i still don't trust u cats, ya'll all strangers,
Im nuts n love cheese, call me Rescue Rangers,
Ya'll niggas traitors, Im pushin X like video Gamers,
I carry symetrical engravers, my ruger's hate haters,
call me GMC, nigga catch a blazer,
yall slip n get caught, niggas catch a taser,
Welcome to Star Wars, here catch this laser,
no time for bitchs, hoe i'll catch ya lata

Simple & Stretched.... Some Metaphor Play Went Down.. Wasnt Too Bad On That Scale..... Sound Like Therez A War Around You The Way You Talkin... Keep Spittin Man

hella dude this was a sick ass flow, not too original but you made it your own by tottaly killin it. keep up the hardcore rymes.

i think it would have been alot better if u used more punches for some of the harder lines...not bad though...it was simple and u stayed on point with your bars......keep doing what u do...~1~

my opinion this shit was toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo fuckin long... n not to say you cant spit hard..... this was really not my type of rhymin.. I would tell you its whack but I dont wanna seem to mean n have you thinkin that I know I'm better than you.... but man step it up... multi's would have help... a bigger vocab would help..... but hey you got ya own style all I can do is tell you how to use it

Stay Up

Sin

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