House rules
30 min to spit
blind spit

checkin' in this mothafucka holla^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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checkin in yo iiight so 30 min to spit iiight den!!! good luck

My style's jewelry I'm cuttin' diamonds like a quick game of spades
This faggot wrote the book "101 ways to jack dick" thats why he's "jackofallTrades"
This mothafucka gettin frantic, cuz I exposed his gay antics
When he see's a man ass he's more than horny, he's "enchanted"
My punches got him enraged, cuz I blowin him off this page
He can't beat me, his job represents his lyrical worth "minimum wage"(he works at mcdonalds)
Look at his sig it proves my point more, he got an ashamed gay man at his front door
He had to post it, becuz of his gay allure, I never thought I be battlin' a "manhore"
You can't deny this battle's mine, I got punches stacked taller than Yao ming
I'm a be charged wit a hate crime for murder him an the gay man at his front door wit a wedding ring

Ah'ight thats my shit, good luck wit yours

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Im About to get my Crush on..........

Im about to Synchronize your ugly hidden Disguise
untill my style is jocked by you and Memorized
Triple_N could never meet the Lyrical Fitness
And ill be the Number One Person to be the Witness
So Realize that sucka you cant, you shouldnt even try Too
Because half the square root of My IQ is beyond You
My words will Rap around ya neck Region
Clinch My flow into your brain and start Squeezin
Untill you Stop Breathin, get you allergic to my punches you start Sneezin.
Then ill bite you with my Posinous Fangs for tryin to mess with a champ
Bitch ass Emcee bleeding stains from your Period with endless Cramps
You will neva eva Sustain
I Juss chewed yo ass up damaging your Physical Frame
Becasue getting a Win From Jack is somthin you will Never Retain

IM OUT!!!!!!!!! THIS BOOOCH

Nica ass spit uppin this shit for some votes iight den

My style's jewelry I'm cuttin' diamonds like a quick game of spades
This faggot wrote the book "101 ways to jack dick" thats why he's "jackofallTrades"
nice wordplay on the first line... ok personal but not that original.
This mothafucka gettin frantic, cuz I exposed his gay antics
When he see's a man ass he's more than horny, he's "enchanted"
i like the rhyme, punch is kinda basic
My punches got him enraged, cuz I blowin him off this page
He can't beat me, his job represents his lyrical worth "minimum wage"(he works at mcdonalds)
haha... nice.
Look at his sig it proves my point more, he got an ashamed gay man at his front door
He had to post it, becuz of his gay allure, I never thought I be battlin' a "manhore"
meh.. not as good
You can't deny this battle's mine, I got punches stacked taller than Yao ming
I'm a be charged wit a hate crime for murder him an the gay man at his front door wit a wedding ring
alright... time for a new punch... kinda stretched too



Im about to Synchronize your ugly hidden Disguise
untill my style is jocked by you and Memorized
nice multi, punch lacking
Triple_N could never meet the Lyrical Fitness
And ill be the Number One Person to be the Witness
this is not a well developed punch
So Realize that sucka you cant, you shouldnt even try Too
Because half the square root of My IQ is beyond You
aight, i like the flow on this one a lot
My words will Rap around ya neck Region
Clinch My flow into your brain and start Squeezin
Untill you Stop Breathin, get you allergic to my punches you start Sneezin.
not a huge fan of 3 line bars.. you kinda messed up your flow
Then ill bite you with my Posinous Fangs for tryin to mess with a champ
Bitch ass Emcee bleeding stains from your Period with endless Crampa
ok... not that well developed though
You will neva eva Sustain
I Juss chewed yo ass up damaging your Physical Frame
blah on flow... blah on punch
Becasue getting a Win From Jack is somthin you will Never Retain
ok i guess this was part of the other two lines... the last word there should be "obtain" not "retain."


Again... not sure what all the hype is about JoaT... you got a lot of mutlis and talk a big game in your verse, but your punches are just totally lacking. v/ triple N.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

My style's jewelry I'm cuttin' diamonds like a quick game of spades
This faggot wrote the book "101 ways to jack dick" thats why he's "jackofallTrades"


^^^ decent attempt...but flow was off due to extra syllables...almost like you forced this punch.. eh


My punches got him enraged, cuz I blowin him off this page
He can't beat me, his job represents his lyrical worth "minimum wage"(he works at mcdonalds)

^^ decent personal...coulda hit harder tho






So Realize that sucka you cant, you shouldnt even try Too
Because half the square root of My IQ is beyond You

^^^ dats hot


Rhyme jack
Flow Jack
Punches Jack


Vote: Jack...way more refined verse


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Tripple N-ur opener was ur best to me...ur punches was ok tho over all...ur flow and structure i wasnt diggin it...but it was easy 2 read...i just think u need to make ur shit a lil more personal but funny....FUNNY PUNCHES WILL WIN U BATTLES TRUST ME

Jackofalltrades-not bad man...u came hard u took this to him more than i expected...ur punches didnt hit hard cause the wordplay didnt phase me...but ur vocab was good...u just need to learn how 2 make ur punches hit hard and im damn sure u'll be 1 of the best on here

vote-TRIPLE N

says i cant vote on it...thats odd...but oh well...thats wht i just thought anyways....pce

jack...i think ur verse was a lil basic,...ur IQ line was prolly ur best..but that period line...that was lame....
triple n,no punches really stood out,but i was feelin ur style a lil more than jack's...u win but not by much i've seen u spit better

vote=triple n

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333 good vocab personals structure and flow try and throw in some more multis
jack work on ur structure personals and vocab i liked ur flow like lk said u came a lil basic work on comp[lexity
vote 33 he hit a lil harder came a lil more complex good verses from both though

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WOW TRIPLE_N REALLY SHOWED WUT HE HAD HIS PUNCHES HIS FLOW HIS VOCAB HIS MULTIS SHIT HIS WHOLE RAP WAS JUST PLAIN OLD BETTER JUST LOOK
My style's jewelry I'm cuttin' diamonds like a quick game of spades
This faggot wrote the book "101 ways to jack dick" thats why he's "jackofallTrades"
This mothafucka gettin frantic, cuz I exposed his gay antics
When he see's a man ass he's more than horny, he's "enchanted"
My punches got him enraged, cuz I blowin him off this page
He can't beat me, his job represents his lyrical worth "minimum wage"(he works at mcdonalds)
Look at his sig it proves my point more, he got an ashamed gay man at his front door
He had to post it, becuz of his gay allure, I never thought I be battlin' a "manhore"
You can't deny this battle's mine, I got punches stacked taller than Yao ming
I'm a be charged wit a hate crime for murder him an the gay man at his front door wit a wedding ring

Ah'ight thats my shit, good luck wit yours
MY VOTE GOES TO TRIPLE_N