u from green bay so u must know the packers
ur like ahmand green and Im like the eagels linebacker
Im about to hit u wit such great force
U gon have to pay an incerible amount of life support
I be the bring the symptons of fear and paralysis
try to shoot me dogg all ur shots be missin
my lyrics are of the supreme the higher
u say u got beef but all u got is oscar meyer
I be over here bringing the torture
my burning lyrcis be bringing the shorchere
so now its time to lose u ran out of luck
this a bubba in jail moment u been fucked
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yo homie no.. ..this is blah.. ..needs elavation.. ..
its to simple and it needs some creativity and wittyness fast
but overall it was basicly 5/10.. ..
Aw son, I'm sorry to see you didn't learn like you said you did
Awfully terrible, and seeing you writing made me feel sorry kid
See you're from orlando, don't matter, you still won't beat me
Your verses are so simple they belongs in The World Of Disney
You keep your secret away? Nope avi clearly states you're gay
I study my prey, and so far, you're just one of my daily delays
Staying away? Nope once again you're missing the whole point
While you hope to be dope, you still ain't on level with a joint
You missin' a sig, Like you're not original and sign annonomous
You're doomed, with you being the weaker side out of both us
obvious this verse is the winner.. ..has more vet quality.. ..
you can see the werdplay is more consistent and better.. ..
punches directed much better and had nice structure.. ..

vote/dopename