checkn in

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You got it all planned out in your head, a simple victory...
You think your a big shit emcee, son you just stepped up...
to the next degree...You think you can win so easily...
but I can gurantee, you battle against me and you'll...
meet defeat...probly thinkin of ideas watchin raps on...
MTV...It don't matter how many lines you drop, cuz your...
rhymes so lame, look like you bought them from a junk shop...
but enough about your rhymes, lets get down to you...
hows it gonna feel to get stomped makin your first...
rap battle debut....cuz your just unequal-to...
the shit that I lay down will slice through whatever you do...
now back to your lines and rhymes, you must of missed...
the signs, anyone with half a brain would know i drop...
it like its a crime, no time for you to rewind back and...
steal somethin wrote by pac or biggy back in their prime

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bloody's a hoe he aint even gonna post you wanna bttle me beyond pissed? let me kno

you fucking slut bag of poop

I'll be on tomorrow some time from 4pm-3am heh not to sure what time....just set up a topic tomorro between me n u...dont set a post time limit tho cuz im not sure when i'll b back on

I DON'T DO TOPICS YO i'll battle you on some off the top shit....and i will set a due date...i'll set it up if you can't anser back and let me kno if you can and will..othrwise...also is that till 3am E.T.? if not the due time will be on wednsday by10 P.M. if so the due time, it;s gonna be a due time aight??? otherwise due time will be by 3 A.M. Wednesday night. that sound good?

you're dissing~my~lines before you seeing~me~rhyme yet/
start kissing~my~ass coz you are missing~your~punch shit/
i'm pissing on your verse without transforming~it~to~worse/
it's wack in the first place so i'm just leaving~it~for~curse/
your making predictions and assume that your gonna win/
when your really a faggot, need no costume for Halloween/
from this scene and beyond, your spit is a fallacy/
illogical premises*, stating your fabricated story/
when the only freestyle you did was typing shit on internet/
i'll wipe this poo with tissue out of Rap Battle's shit/
so biggie and pac won't cry when you murder~their style/
the only killing that will happen is "me"-shooting-"you"-die/


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*in logic, a statement is a premise. premise=scene

LMAO, sorry coz i keep on putting those italics, bold and all that.

anyway, No Abuse, i can't battle you yet coz i have already 2 active battles going on.

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yo, bloodymurder took this, i didnt like the other guys flow, its a matter of a fact there wasnt any flow..bloody's punches were a lil better, and he had some flow!

vote=bloodymurder...

PCe

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need a couple more votes to win

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