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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

Feeding allowed?
Interesting.
I'm here.

here here
fuckin charater limit

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I Guess I'm In...
And When I Drop, This Kidd Is Left With Tenebrific Thoughts..
That Reminds Him...
Of The 9 Wins He Got On RB...And All 17 Times He Lost..

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=246687
Obviouslly you have no future, with graphics so weak.
With blending so bad, you'll leave the image in the street.

What difference does that make, I still won't Dl your promo.
I'm a straight male, how does it feel to be called a homo.

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Ten Straight? And Diverse?
How When His Whole Style Is Monochromatic And Pink,
Add A Little Black You See.
His Sig, Pictured With The Bitch He's Aspiring To Be.

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Damn, overall i think this was a pretty weak battle.



^this was kind of a simple approach man, the wording was off
and overall this whole bar was stretched. Played concept, but
an attempt

Ten



I wasn't really feeling this, maybe it was just poorly executed.
but i didn't like the wording. overall meh.



..........uh, No!




Stretched...like hell. That whole middle bar shouldn't even be there
poorly poorly worded as well. No punch..


Dude, overall this is a tough decision. Neither one of you really
had a punch. both poorly worded both bars. I'm gon have to go
with Ten, on this one. His 1st bar was the only one that had potential,
but really this could go either way.

g'luck

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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

^ i figured my lines would come of stretched. my flow is really stop go.
i have to find a way to incorperate that into text, lol thats why they are written like they are.

thanks for the vote.

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I Guess I'm In...
And When I Drop, This Kidd Is Left With Tenebrific Thoughts..
That Reminds Him...
Of The 9 Wins He Got On RB...And All 17 Times He Lost..
good personal but one this good you could have come up with something better. no real punch.
Ten Straight? And Diverse?
How When His Whole Style Is Monochromatic And Pink,
Add A Little Black You See.
His Sig, Pictured With The Bitch He's Aspiring To Be.
another personal that has potential, but no punch

Obviouslly you have no future, with graphics so weak.
With blending so bad, you'll leave the image in the street.
personal, but again, nothing really hurting him.
What difference does that make, I still won't Dl your promo.
I'm a straight male, how does it feel to be called a homo.
idk what you were thinking here...just...nah

both used personals but didn't turn them into punches...just kind of stating shit with em. hard to chose the better punches when there aren't any. i guess i have to choose though and i thought Young's lines were closer to punches than Ten's, so i'm giving it to Young.

vote - Young Kidd