We got beef na man...........

10 lines,
25 mins atm,
no D/R,
no crew,
no feeding,
no freeposting.
.................................................. ....pz

check............waste of time.............................................. .................pz

checkin in........................................

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Fuck this beef man,

Fuck this coward smash you till your devoured…and leave him seeping,
Fuck wordplay cause that^ had more than your whole verse…
……………......…so kid keep dreaming……….
merk this kid for beefing...everything's against you..nothing for..
lyrical joker..your just pissing about...read the shit in bold..
.....................over to state wat you are......
I guess it was your mum who first told you…………
…………………..that you were really special…………,
But to be honest man ive seen straighter fucking….. comeing from a homosexual,
K spitting into a mirror is the only way i’ll ever meet my match,
Me turning on you to face away..was the best ive seen you spit back,
Its special K…..kelloggs brand but im not that type of cereal killer,
I own this battle with the outline..and leave this bitch to add all filler,


...now stop beefing man............................pz

already 5 mins over............................................pz

Yo I Never Agreed To 25 Mins In The Bitch Slapped, I'll Drop At 6:30 7:00 PM EST, Juss Started To Key

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I Wanted This Due In 24 Hours, But .:K:. Needs A Week..*
Replaying My Words, Is The Closest Way Youd B Unique..**
Got A Straight Answer From Feeble..Get Better To Be Elite..***
Punches Bruise Ya Cheek, Yous A Dog, The Way He Bites Treats..
Like Fat Customers At McDonalds, .:K:. Really Wanted This Beef..****
Beat U With 6 Lines ^, Couldnt Steal This Win If You Were A Thief..
Told Him That I Didnt Want Beef, But He Really Wanted To Be Sick..*****
Thinking That You Hard? Please, Im Giving You This Loss Quick..
He Knew That I'd Beat Him, So He Posted In The Guided Mode..
"Thats Impossible Sorry" "Can You Image Me Winning On Adobe?"******

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**= Replay The Words Is His Crew Motto
***= Feebs Said Get Better, When K Applied For Elite
****= Mad Cow Disease Related
*****= Mad Cow Disease Related
******= Its Backwards, Get It, Replay, Rewind.. So..Creativity Comes INto Play: He Asked Physik In The Sigs For Newbies Thread For A Sig So, He In My verse He Asked If He Can Make A Pic Of Him Winning Against Me On Adobe Get It? If Not, Ask IN Thread..Its A Hard Hitting Punch If You Get IT

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sick shit.:k.: you are the illest hommie u take this in every catigorie................

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sorry bout that free post but its true............................:k.:............DA bomb nigga

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"i got a new toy that will burn a hater,and put a red dot in his eye like the fucking terminater"

Yo get off his dick man.. there's barely room fa his own hand.. smh.

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lmfao^..........ill you wak man...i said id pm you in a week so we could set it up and spit within 30 mins...........who the fuck needs 24 hours to spit 10 lines man............well you but w/ever..votes plz...........................pz

.:K:.
Fuck this coward smash you till your devoured…and leave him seeping,
Fuck wordplay cause that^ had more than your whole verse…
……………......…so kid keep dreaming……….
punch = 4
merk this kid for beefing...everything's against you..nothing for..
lyrical joker..your just pissing about...read the shit in bold..
.....................over to state wat you are......
punch,personal = 4
I guess it was your mum who first told you…………
…………………..that you were really special…………,
But to be honest man ive seen straighter fucking….. comeing from a homosexual,
metiphore,punch,wordplay = 6
K spitting into a mirror is the only way i’ll ever meet my match,
Me turning on you to face away..was the best ive seen you spit back,
-self hype,wordplay,punch = 6
Its special K…..kelloggs brand but im not that type of cereal killer,
I own this battle with the outline..and leave this bitch to add all filler,
-self hype,metiphore = 4

OK nuttin great. Was expecting more to be honest. You did have some creativity tho and 2 fairly decent bars. The mirror wordplay was you best line. It was good. Other than that a very average if not a little less. Also please kill the ....... I know I've heard it's a so called vet style, but you don't utilize it with your flo correctly and it hurt your verse.
Overall = 24
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I Wanted This Due In 24 Hours, But .:K:. Needs A Week..*
Replaying My Words, Is The Closest Way Youd B Unique..**
personal,personal,punch = 7
Got A Straight Answer From Feeble..Get Better To Be Elite..***
Punches Bruise Ya Cheek, Yous A Dog, The Way He Bites Treats..
personal,multi,wordplay = 7
Like Fat Customers At McDonalds, .:K:. Really Wanted This Beef..****
Beat U With 6 Lines ^, Couldnt Steal This Win If You Were A Thief..
metiphore,wordplay,metiphore,-filler = 6
Told Him That I Didnt Want Beef, But He Really Wanted To Be Sick..*****
Thinking That You Hard? Please, Im Giving You This Loss Quick..
wordplay,punch = 5
He Knew That I'd Beat Him, So He Posted In The Guided Mode..
"Thats Impossible Sorry" "Can You Image Me Winning On Adobe?"******
-flo,punch,personal = 5

It's a good thing you had some explanations. However, don't tell me what's a hard punch. Ironicly it isn't, it doesnt even ryhme. You did have a nice verse tho. Nice combination of blows as far as wordplay,personal's, and punches. You did some good research and I think it payed off here. Good Job.
Overall = 30
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Vote = Ill Testament

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uppin(2).......................................... ..............pz

Fuck this coward smash you till your devoured…and leave him seeping,
Fuck wordplay cause that^ had more than your whole verse…
……………......…so kid keep dreaming……….
LOL LIKED THIS OPENER MADE ME LAUGH AND GOOD PUNCH
merk this kid for beefing...everything's against you..nothing for..
lyrical joker..your just pissing about...read the shit in bold..
.....................over to state wat you are......
GD PUNCH AND PERSONAL
I guess it was your mum who first told you…………
…………………..that you were really special…………,
But to be honest man ive seen straighter fucking….. comeing from a homosexual,
LMFAO LUVED THIS LINE GD PUNCH AND WORLDPLAY
K spitting into a mirror is the only way i’ll ever meet my match,
Me turning on you to face away..was the best ive seen you spit back,
BOASTIN BUT STILL I GD LINE
Its special K…..kelloggs brand but im not that type of cereal killer,
I own this battle with the outline..and leave this bitch to add all filler,
DOPE FINISHER 10 OUTA 10 CUMIN FROM DA UK AS HE SHOWED HIS ROOTS BY TLKIN BOUT DA UK KELLOGS CEREAL DOPE FINISHA


I Wanted This Due In 24 Hours, But .:K:. Needs A Week..*
Replaying My Words, Is The Closest Way Youd B Unique..**
NICE OPENER LIKED IT GD PUNCH AND PERSONAL
Got A Straight Answer From Feeble..Get Better To Be Elite..***
Punches Bruise Ya Cheek, Yous A Dog, The Way He Bites Treats..
DIDNT LIKE THIS SO WOT IF FEEBLE SED GET BETTA 2 BE ELITE..
Like Fat Customers At McDonalds, .:K:. Really Wanted This Beef..****
Beat U With 6 Lines ^, Couldnt Steal This Win If You Were A Thief..
OK BUT A FILLER
Told Him That I Didnt Want Beef, But He Really Wanted To Be Sick..*****
Thinking That You Hard? Please, Im Giving You This Loss Quick..
DIDNT LIKE THIS EITHER CUDDA CUM BETTER HERE
He Knew That I'd Beat Him, So He Posted In The Guided Mode..
"Thats Impossible Sorry" "Can You Image Me Winning On Adobe?"******
GD PUNCH


OVERALL I SAY .:K:. TAKES THIS AS I TINK HE HAD THE HARDER HITTING PUNCHES AND I LIKED HIS FLOW.....
ILL TESTAMENT UR SHIT WAS IGHT BUT I THOUGHT U HAD A FEW FILLERS WEN U CUD OF CUM HARDER....... .:K:. FINISHER KILLED IT 4 ME AS HE SHOWED HIS ENGLISH ROOTS WHICH I ALWAYS LIKE 2 C IN BATTLES.........

OVERALL MY VOTE GOES 2 .:K:.

ILL TESTAMENT CUD U HIT THIS UP PLZ

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113858

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