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11-13-06, 11:35 PM
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what dat be...
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life by jc
IP: 5021 8C8D
check it out just quick verse on a bimbi beat.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=467016 links are coming http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236885 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3107125 Last edited by JC : 11-13-06 at 11:46 PM. |
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11-13-06, 11:40 PM
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I see dumb people
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IP: 0F6F B5B3
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237065
^word you should hit that up for your second link and shittttttt ~_~ i'll peep yours in a bit
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11-13-06, 11:41 PM
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L.E
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IP: 8471 8CE5
Listening...
Beat is pretty basic amateur. Delivery is very uncomfortable, and very monotonous. Flow is choppy. You need to elevate man...not a bad start, I started worse. Return the favor on me and Ebirc's song Horror. Thanks. |
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11-13-06, 11:43 PM
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I see dumb people
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IP: 0F6F B5B3
aiight peepin....
beat in..... aiight man much better than last track i heard... but like flow don't match beat. For basic flow try to do it so that all the rhymin' words hit the snare, if you know what that is. The like clappin' shit.....well on thsi beat sound more like drum. also try and up the emotion a bit too yo. Like here it's just monotone. like spit it angry like if you want, like yell a lil.. but word def better than last one I heard man. so step in right direction. keep practicing yo.
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11-13-06, 11:45 PM
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I see dumb people
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IP: 0F6F B5B3
oh yea, RTF on my track I linked in first post. wordddd
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11-13-06, 11:52 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 6A24 77A2
alot of improvement
flow is robotic and you sound liek your mumbeling towards the end jsut need to be more entergetic and just try to hit the snares liek spul said
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11-14-06, 12:19 AM
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what dat be...
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IP: 5021 8C8D
uppy my upps.......
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11-22-06, 05:20 AM
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New to RV
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IP: F751 2D88
Flow & delivery is off, not really riding the beat that great, lyrics are sub-par, i unno man keep elevating, work on ya bar structure for a smoother flow.
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