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12-05-04, 01:39 AM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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Life Is to the Juicy Beat
IP: 75E4 9AE4
This is prolly one of the best tracks i've done in a while....check it out...its pretty tight...
www.soundclick.com/jayjking its the Life Is song... -------------------- Links http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1786280 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=163718
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12-05-04, 01:56 AM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: 75E4 9AE4
Uppin this is crazy.....
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12-05-04, 02:07 AM
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The Light
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IP: 7B26 F5BE
lyrically it was weak... you were prolly vibin with the beat.. and i can since that.. but you werent sayin shit for real.. well you were.. but you said it wrong.. work on your lyrics.. the most.... flow was cool.. quality was ehh.. it wasent bad.. but it wasent clear.. keep droppin tho.. -1
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Mixtape Pushed Back to mid september.. Holla at me for a copy still I'm felt cause im real. Can you say the same ? Prolly not.
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12-05-04, 02:08 AM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: 75E4 9AE4
ok....how aint i saying it right????
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12-05-04, 02:12 AM
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The Light
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IP: 7B26 F5BE
i meant.. your wording in your verses... the way you said the shit, didnt get you the effect it could have if said in a different way.. you know.. how u spit something matters alot
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Can I Metaphor?
Mixtape Pushed Back to mid september.. Holla at me for a copy still I'm felt cause im real. Can you say the same ? Prolly not.
Proud OYD member again
. <------- That is whassup |
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12-05-04, 02:13 AM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: 75E4 9AE4
iight i'll redo it ......right now
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12-05-04, 02:24 AM
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The Light
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IP: 7B26 F5BE
nooooo lol.. i aint mean for u to redo it fam.. i just meant.. practice on your story tellin aspects of your spits and how you want things to come across to your audience.. iunno fam its just my opinion and wha ti thought about it.. aint nuffin wrong wif it mayne.. just keep droppin -1
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Can I Metaphor?
Mixtape Pushed Back to mid september.. Holla at me for a copy still I'm felt cause im real. Can you say the same ? Prolly not.
Proud OYD member again
. <------- That is whassup |
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12-05-04, 02:28 AM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: 75E4 9AE4
well i just did and the presense is there now..its good now....
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12-05-04, 02:33 AM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: 75E4 9AE4
Its not up on SC yet..i'll tell you when i change it...
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12-05-04, 01:27 PM
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IP: 52FB 3AA1
damn son...u messin up a good beat fa real...ya lyrics need improvement..ya beat is way to fuckin loud..and the way u flowed...didnt really go like it should..simple rhymin....maybe re do it..and put some more effort in it..turn the beat down...ya quality is pretty good tho..the wya you can fix the flow on this is write MORE in ya bars...so u wont stop after every line...
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12-05-04, 04:22 PM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: 75E4 9AE4
only been rappin on beats for 2 months....so how bout that this is my second month.....and i'm only 15 please
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12-05-04, 07:52 PM
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The Light
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IP: 7B26 F5BE
you got time mayne.. aint no rush.. just get comfortable on the mic man
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Can I Metaphor?
Mixtape Pushed Back to mid september.. Holla at me for a copy still I'm felt cause im real. Can you say the same ? Prolly not.
Proud OYD member again
. <------- That is whassup |
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12-06-04, 02:13 AM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: 75E4 9AE4
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You think i'm good for a 15 year old wit only two months of recording under his belt...
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