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Old 07-26-06, 08:36 AM   #1
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Red face Who Dat?...Quick 16

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Old 07-26-06, 11:41 AM   #2
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beats hot man...feelin it...

shoulda kicked in sooner...took too long...quality is ok...flow is nice for a new audio head...lyrics are straight...delivery is cool as well...finger fuckin bar lol...

but ye...keep doin ya thing man...keep droppin

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Old 07-26-06, 04:29 PM   #3
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4sho fam

i was droppin drom some quick 16
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Old 07-26-06, 04:33 PM   #4
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Minus all hate, because I would say this to anyone, most of your punches are ollllllllllllllllllld flips and shit or fucking off the wall concepts that have no particular relevance. Basically you write your audios like you write your text which isn't a good thing.Your flow is iight but you rush sometimes and it sounds bad, other than that and your quality, this was iight.
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Old 07-26-06, 04:37 PM   #5
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I exspected u 2 hate

but i see u do got an ounce of Maturity n u

Thanx 4 the feed i guess

by the way i didnt write shit on this track
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Old 07-26-06, 04:43 PM   #6
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I aint hating on shit except for the fact that your style of writing makes room for creativity but most of it is bland and tired and played or streched. The thing about your flow is just a problem that almost everyone on the site has so it's not even you, just a common thing, flow is hard to master. I said it was iight so of course I have maturity. You just need to expand what you do because as of now you sound like a boring mixtape artist. Your voice is too generic to do anything for you so everything else you do has to make up for it and as of now, it doesn't. That's not hate, that's feedback and just honesty. I would NEVER intentionally demean someones track if it was actually good because I respect hip hop too much and know what it takes to drop a track, I'm just trying to help, once you can drop your ego and the superficial beef you'll be able to see that. -_-
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Old 07-26-06, 04:46 PM   #7
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I see wha u sayin....i aint holdin no grudges

i cant get better with out constructive criticisim
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Old 07-26-06, 05:03 PM   #8
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shits straight yo. Im feelin dis. Good flow. Punches are cool. The quality is gettin better with every track. Reppin Ai to the fullest. No doubt the rookie of the year. Haha good shit famz. Keep em comin. your emotion is pretty good. im feelin dis'

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Old 07-26-06, 05:53 PM   #9
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4sho fam..............
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Old 07-26-06, 06:06 PM   #10
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dats some smooth shit
dat intro is hella cool
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Old 07-26-06, 06:38 PM   #11
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ya got some nice punches here and there........up ya quality thoe...but hey work wit wut ya got......ya got a nice flow towards the end i think u rushed a part......but not bad.......aiite.......

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Old 07-26-06, 06:43 PM   #12
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Good stuff.

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Old 07-26-06, 07:35 PM   #13
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4 sho get @ me

thanx 4 the feed....
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Old 07-27-06, 04:17 PM   #14
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was that supposed to be a diss cause if it was I said all I needed to say in the audio battle to shut this clown/fag up its said the real ROOKIE OF THE YEAR FOR THIS AUDIO SHIT IS HERE
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Old 07-27-06, 04:34 PM   #15
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lol u gone come in my Thread Hatein?

did i add a post 2 yo shitty ass songz that nobody commented on?

no...so thankz 4 givin me more posts and views lol

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