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oCANti 2 66.67%
Wr!te Mind 1 33.33%
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Old 01-02-04, 08:17 PM   #16
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ocant i got this he had better puches and disses.write mind work on ur flow and try to creat puunches that hit a lil harder and you'll be straight.

VOTE: OCANTI

vote on this when u hit 100 posts
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103263

vote gone. -feeble.

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Old 01-02-04, 10:02 PM   #17
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Old 01-02-04, 10:15 PM   #18
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yo aight battle

------write mind verse----

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I love beating hoes...after I love 'em...and me and O have been through the mak
This bitch can Duck me all she wants...it proves she's qWack
I aint sexist...so you can retract my earlier statment
right after I cut this rose.....and crack the pavement
Hoes usually get Me up....but watch this bitch put her hands high
"Wr!te..you just can't rob a slut online.." ...........O...Can't I?
Losing just an action and I'm gon' spray this bitch with verbs
My text is fucked....and O is hanging on my words
O i'll stop now just meet your demands and your wishes
but I got a question?
If your here battling me...who the fuk is washing dishes?

alote of pounches and personals but they weren't to hard you could work on your structure and flow
good wordplay

----Ocanti verse---

DISHES?...let me find out you're not the one that's in the kitchen
I'm still washin the sheets from ya middle of the night pissin
Listen...Oh! what you thought I could'nt flip it/rhymes stay exquisite flows from the entrance-intense
u left fumes that went to war with insense
u're a rap horror/8 mile ac-tor
u would never beat me/cuz I'll leave you on your act floor wit yo back torn
you can get on RB and front if you want to
you'll be sleeping at your moms/ and yo hand will be fuckin u
clip this rose /you'll be investin in the birth of a merker
you crack any more pavement/ and you're going to be one less construction worker

better overall verse with harder pounches and personals metas and wordplay

nice spiting

------------------vote goes to Ocanti-----------------

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Old 01-02-04, 10:25 PM   #19
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Well my vote would go to Ocanti. But she was feeding to much and we all know thats a No-No. So that being said Write had some oright punches and nice flow. so my vote is Write

no hate.....

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Old 01-02-04, 11:13 PM   #20
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Old 01-03-04, 01:45 AM   #21
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Old 01-03-04, 11:39 AM   #22
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I think Write had some sweet punches. I liked these two:

Quote:
Hoes usually get Me up....but watch this bitch put her hands high
"Wr!te..you just can't rob a slut online.." ...........O...Can't I?

Quote:
O i'll stop now just meet your demands and your wishes
but I got a question?
If your here battling me...who the fuk is washing dishes?


On flow, I'd have to give it to Ocanti. On creativity I'd also have ot give it to Ocanti... I like the letter style.

Overall if I could vote I'd vote for O, but it's a close call.
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