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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
oCANti 2 66.67%
Wr!te Mind 1 33.33%
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Old 01-02-04, 01:33 PM   #1
Wr!te Mind
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Wr!te Mind .v. oCANti

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10 lines
I'll drop first

you feel free to drop when ever you feel like..cuz I don't fucking care
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Old 01-02-04, 01:39 PM   #2
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well go head consider this my check in
I'll drop in a few minutes when I see yours displayed
aiight GOODLUCK*
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Old 01-02-04, 01:51 PM   #3
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I love beating hoes...after I love 'em...and me and O have been through the mak
This bitch can Duck me all she wants...it proves she's qWack
I aint sexist...so you can retract my earlier statment
right after I cut this rose.....and crack the pavement
Hoes usually get Me up....but watch this bitch put her hands high
"Wr!te..you just can't rob a slut online.." ...........O...Can't I?
Losing just an action and I'm gon' spray this bitch with verbs
My text is fucked....and O is hanging on my words
O i'll stop now just meet your demands and your wishes
but I got a question?
If your here battling me...who the fuk is washing dishes?
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Old 01-02-04, 04:24 PM   #4
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This has been a Mr. and Mrs. Production!!!

Dear:Write Mind

DISHES?...let me find out you're not the one that's in the kitchen
I'm still washin the sheets from ya middle of the night pissin
Listen...Oh! what you thought I could'nt flip it/rhymes stay exquisite flows from the entrance-intense
u left fumes that went to war with insense
u're a rap horror/8 mile ac-tor
u would never beat me/cuz I'll leave you on your act floor wit yo back torn
you can get on RB and front if you want to
you'll be sleeping at your moms/ and yo hand will be fuckin u
clip this rose /you'll be investin in the birth of a merker
you crack any more pavement/ and you're going to be one less construction worker


Sincerely, Your RB sweetheart oCANti


A Write....I give it to you I did not expect that, and in my mind that was crucial...u're alright in my book u furball.

ALright honest votez, anyone like my story?
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Old 01-02-04, 04:29 PM   #5
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oCANti Tore up!!!!

Man that was tight, betta than tha otha pretenda!!

I cud make u a class beat to that if you ever want one...

L8rs DJ JAB
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Old 01-02-04, 04:36 PM   #6
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YO WR!TE YOU DONE THIS ONE FOR ME. I LIKE THE PUNCHES YOU PUT IN ABOUT GIRLS DOIN THE DIDHES AND SHIT.

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''O i'll stop now just meet your demands and your wishes
but I got a question?
If your here battling me...who the fuk is washing dishes?''

Gay vote - Gone

Keep it up and you're going to be banned. - Token

Last edited by Token : 01-02-04 at 08:59 PM.
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Old 01-02-04, 05:26 PM   #7
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Old 01-02-04, 06:04 PM   #8
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Hey follow the new voting rules people.....break it down....


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Old 01-02-04, 06:18 PM   #9
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Old 01-02-04, 06:31 PM   #10
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Man this battle was very close humm I honestly don't know who to give it to. I am a person that love metaphors and concrete punchlines. So I will have to go with oCANti because of those two reasons. Wr!te Mind you got skillz though I will give it up

Winner: oCANti
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Old 01-02-04, 06:47 PM   #11
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Yo that was close and shit but Im givin it to Ocanti
she had a solid reply wit hard punches and funny shit too.
flow was real good
could work on the vocab tho but other then that it was tight

Vote: Ocanti
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Old 01-02-04, 08:02 PM   #12
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I said vote on battles


please break shit down ^^^ those votes are queer, how would lyou like if I came to your battle and voted like that........

3-1 to my girl...... 1-0 me in the polls
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Old 01-02-04, 08:05 PM   #13
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This battle was pretty close but...

Ocanti: Your verse was nice. This is the best one of yours I've seen. Nice replies and nice metas. Decent flow. Your punches and wordplay could still be stronger, however.

Write Mind: Your verse was nice, but not that creative. Nice punches and okay flow, but you need better wordplay and find somethin' else to talk about. It was still good, though.
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Old 01-02-04, 08:07 PM   #14
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Oh, my bad, the vote goes to Ocanti.

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Old 01-02-04, 08:12 PM   #15
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Write Mind: I aint sexist...so you can retract my earlier statment
right after I cut this rose.....and crack the pavement

Ocanti: clip this rose /you'll be investin in the birth of a merker
you crack any more pavement/ and you're going to be one less construction worker
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