10 lines. due 30 mins after check in. anything goes.

Listen up little bitch dont even think about it
you beat me here and now, i couldnt allow it
A million times over, yo rhymes is no match for these
You sure move like a butterfly but you suck like liberace
Im gonna make this shit clear like a bottle of aquafina
serve your ass up, prepare to receive a sepina
Copy Copy, u rap like a xerox machine
Don't forget i am the champion, and yous just a queen
So just remember one thing, as i slap till you fall
stay out of my way, cause im fresh like pine sol.

Whoa shit sorry didn't see this battle. check check...
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Todd's Goin and Goin, Just Like The Energhizer Bunny/
But This Whigga's Battery Ran Out When He Spit The Above, Not Funny/
Zappin His Brain With Way Less Then Complex Lines/
Gave Him Lyrical Distrify wit word's like whigga he couldn't define/
Spittin On His Toungue's The Only Way To Get This Cat To Spit/
Maybe Fresh Like Pine Sol In Alabama But Here This Redneack Gets Ripped/

Uppin fo' votes
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Uppin come on.
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good job todd. ur starting...very slowly....but ur starting to get the hang of this. u merked him. first of all....clock fed on his closer....secondly he didnt punch hard. 3rdly he didnt even spit enough lines to make a dent in you...since they werent agressive enough. todd u came ur best yet.....some good concepts in there...just work on the execution of your ideas.

vote: todd go go todd go go todd go

alright, well yea todd, for being new here that was pretty good, maybe look up spelling on some words, like subpoena. your rap also was one of the best with humor ive seen in a while.

Copy Copy, u rap like a xerox machine

i like that line right there the most. good battle for ya.

and um clockwyse... wow my advice to you is use more lines and also write sentences that make sense when you put them together not just random shit all put into one paragraph...also spelling more than half of the words in your rap correctly would really help out... a lot.

vote--- todd.

Ok ok I understand Uppin...
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Todd killed him, he flowed better, had better punches.....


vote Todd

can anyone drop a few votes on dis one plz


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104412

Todd takes this, ahh. Better flow, punches, and everything else than his opponent. His verse was clearly the better one, he takes this and his first win. Good luck elevating guys

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