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Old 03-10-09, 04:55 PM   #1
Da Problem Child
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Da Problem Child vs MurDaH187

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This guy has been talkin so much shyt, be he's trash. Its time to put him in his place!

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DQ'ed.. Godz Child & Da Problem Child


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Old 03-10-09, 04:55 PM   #2
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Old 03-10-09, 06:28 PM   #3
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your mouth is much more confident than your lines, u think?
when you have proved that even with a pen you couldnt MurDah ink
when you dish out shyt to godz it doesn't help
so stop talking back to daddy, im 2 seconds from taking of my belt
you should masterbate your abillities to improve your skills
because even with your finger glued to the trigger, you couldnt kill
i have every right in the handbook to dog-u-son
this dumb fuck has 5 battles in the forums, losing all-but-one
face and understand that you lines are inconsistant and foresakin
time to home run this fake baller, like Bonds in the 8th-in
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Old 03-10-09, 07:03 PM   #4
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hurry up lame and get online so you can post your verse
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Old 03-10-09, 11:12 PM   #5
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Old 03-13-09, 09:23 PM   #6
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be happy niggas got me fucked up and out of my battleing self
short'en these bars to show it really didnt need much to beat'em myself....
no punch just facts, remove hes teeth still made'em spit out hes gum rap
get the hunch that, like ex's hoes ya style rv dont really want that...
fuck ya name soppuse to mean?, here let me help u solve'em
you aint da problem child u just a child with a problem....
grow up to the point you show nuts, then i'll part them
if niggas love the beat an dont remember ur speech, guess in rap u was da problem....
and go ahead rap verse say it ^^^^ it was streched
but hes verse uglyer then the strech mark on funk flex.......
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Old 03-14-09, 07:17 PM   #7
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nigga that "solve the problem" shit is old, everybody keep sayin that.....be original
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Old 03-15-09, 01:07 AM   #8
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Did u notice when I said nigga got me outta my battle mood or u thought that was soppuse to be part of a hot ass bar???......... is u serious..
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Old 03-15-09, 09:16 PM   #9
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Voted For: Da Problem Child

Ok murdah 2 bars ending in problem-didnt like that.
Your stucture was 10 times better tho.Funk flex played.Not personal enough.lacked in hard punches.
Ok problem jus took it.
Daddy line laime.You had a personal yay!!
Slightly better verse but still weak.
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Old 03-15-09, 09:20 PM   #10
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Voted For: Da Problem Child

i caught murdah bitting "you aint da problem child u just a child with a problem" why bite jadakiss

link is http://www.metrolyrics.com/problem-...s-jadakiss.html
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Old 03-16-09, 04:43 PM   #11
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ooooh thats bad.......very bad, c'mon MurDaH!!!!!!
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Old 03-16-09, 04:55 PM   #12
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Voted For: MurDaH187

k this was nothing special lines werent dissing him just generic disses the child with a problem line was ya nicest in this battle i dont rate flow cuz its text and has none but structure was cool also

as for problems verse it was a problem basic as hellgeneric punches and not one lines stood you were trying to make shit fit that shouldnt overall this was a horrible battle both of you elevate no hate but if yall ever plan on stepping to a microphone yall have nuff work to do

vote murdah
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Old 03-16-09, 04:57 PM   #13
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Old 03-16-09, 05:03 PM   #14
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Ok murdah 2 bars ending in problem-didnt like that.
Your stucture was 10 times better tho.Funk flex played.Not personal enough.lacked in hard punches.
Ok problem jus took it.
Daddy line laime.You had a personal yay!!
Slightly better verse but still weak.

bro you can't say my verse is weak when im better then you!
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Old 03-16-09, 10:09 PM   #15
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Voted For: Da Problem Child

be happy niggas got me fucked up and out of my battleing self
short'en these bars to show it really didnt need much to beat'em myself....
wasnt feelin it
no punch just facts, remove hes teeth still made'em spit out hes gum rap
get the hunch that, like ex's hoes ya style rv dont really want that...
nice flow... where the punch?
fuck ya name soppuse to mean?, here let me help u solve'em
you aint da problem child u just a child with a problem....
ehh simple name play but okay
grow up to the point you show nuts, then i'll part them
if niggas love the beat an dont remember ur speech, guess in rap u was da problem....
simple... same concept as above, dont use the same concept twice
and go ahead rap verse say it ^^^^ it was streched
but hes verse uglyer then the strech mark on funk flex.......
i was feelin the concept untill you came to the punch... i thought this line coulda been way better, this line has some potential


your mouth is much more confident than your lines, u think?
when you have proved that even with a pen you couldnt MurDah ink
simple decent nameplay
when you dish out shyt to godz it doesn't help
so stop talking back to daddy, im 2 seconds from taking of my belt
okay, kind of a played concept
you should masterbate your abillities to improve your skills
because even with your finger glued to the trigger, you couldnt kill
ehh
i have every right in the handbook to dog-u-son
this dumb fuck has 5 battles in the forums, losing all-but-one
coo personal
face and understand that you lines are inconsistant and foresakin
time to home run this fake baller, like Bonds in the 8th-in
not feelin it

This was a close battle but i gotta vote for Da problem for personals... murdah you gettin a lot better though. keep workin on it.
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