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Old 04-07-09, 07:31 PM   #1
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Immune vs Coke Dealer

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4 Bars - 8 lines
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Old 04-07-09, 07:33 PM   #2
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Immune has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-09 07:33 PM.
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Old 04-07-09, 07:38 PM   #3
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Coke Dealer has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-09 07:38 PM.
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Old 04-07-09, 07:39 PM   #4
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im ready to drop .
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Old 04-07-09, 07:42 PM   #5
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I'm rich bitch, check the pics kids, BMW riding sick
N i own this clown, makes sense, the way Im Mun E with spits
I'm on a level above this cat, and i can prove it with facts
Cuz i've never met someone who had to beg to battle so bad
Already lost badly, JTR dug the grave Coke bout to make em hurt
Cuz I'd say the only thing he Immune to is winnin on Rapverse
You a lame bitch, shit, PLEASE make sure to space ya lines apart
Because frankly we all need a break after reading such horrible bars
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Old 04-07-09, 08:26 PM   #6
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see the thing is your not on my level am stright outta your class I'll simply make him fold
As the only coke he's dealing with is in a 2 litre bottle and is best served cold!!!

See I spit that pure coke that will slap you harder than gods hand!
See he spits that unwanted watered down shit as his cokes of the diet and zero brand!!!

Cause he'll get his ass capped and his top popped more times than a million coke bottles man he ain't fly
Because my rhymes are notorious and BIG so question is you ready to die?

See he claims he's destroying tricks on the daily well not anymore as basically am way better
So you can now call me Pepsi cause of today am cokes main competitor!!!
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Old 04-07-09, 08:27 PM   #7
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rofl

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Old 04-07-09, 08:42 PM   #8
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This was feedback posted for Immune

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your first bar was pretty weak, the set up was mad stretched and the punch was real basic, you need to come more creative, same as the 2nd and you used the same concept twice in a row. 3rd again pretty basic with a stretched set up.

need to beef it up.
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Old 04-07-09, 08:47 PM   #9
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what a gay system, any way coke

I'm rich bitch, check the pics kids, BMW riding sick
N i own this clown, makes sense, the way Im Mun E with spits
this was ok, kinda low level but still creative
I'm on a level above this cat, and i can prove it with facts
Cuz i've never met someone who had to beg to battle so bad
lol not bad, could have been harsher
Already lost badly, JTR dug the grave Coke bout to make em hurt
Cuz I'd say the only thing he Immune to is winnin on Rapverse
lol this was cool but a little basic
You a lame bitch, shit, PLEASE make sure to space ya lines apart
Because frankly we all need a break after reading such horrible bars
concept could work, don't like the wording though


coke came with better structure and more personals which tend to be more effective then name play, immune you have to get more agresive and bring some harsher concepts to the table.

vote coke........

someone fix this please.
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Old 04-08-09, 11:17 AM   #10
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see the thing is your not on my level am stright outta your class I'll simply make him fold
As the only coke he's dealing with is in a 2 litre bottle and is best served cold!!!
thats his job, he's a coca cola dealer... so this bar sucks
See I spit that pure coke that will slap you harder than gods hand!
See he spits that unwanted watered down shit as his cokes of the diet and zero brand!!!
no, your wording sucked
Cause he'll get his ass capped and his top popped more times than a million coke bottles man he ain't fly
Because my rhymes are notorious and BIG so question is you ready to die?
ok... still not hard hitting, forced wordplay, and mad stretched
See he claims he's destroying tricks on the daily well not anymore as basically am way better
So you can now call me Pepsi cause of today am cokes main competitor!!!
played out

you tried personals and nameplays but they worded like crap, they been played out and your wordplay was forced and none of your punches hit hard and they were all stretched dude.

vs.

I'm rich bitch, check the pics kids, BMW riding sick
N i own this clown, makes sense, the way Im Mun E with spits
cool wordplay, no real punch, shoulda worded it better
I'm on a level above this cat, and i can prove it with facts
Cuz i've never met someone who had to beg to battle so bad
lol played out but funny
Already lost badly, JTR dug the grave Coke bout to make em hurt
Cuz I'd say the only thing he Immune to is winnin on Rapverse
cool personal, kinda simple though
You a lame bitch, shit, PLEASE make sure to space ya lines apart
Because frankly we all need a break after reading such horrible bars
true

not the best battle here but you did what you had to do, your shit was a lot nicer to read, your punches landed way better and your wordplay and nameplays were a lot more effective

v/coke
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Old 04-08-09, 07:10 PM   #11
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you have an extreme advantage in every battle. Every fucking retard you choose focuses all up on your name and throws a stupid ass verse with a bunch of blow and soda metaphores.

You were much better than this other dude...as he was way stretched, basic, and just basicly new.Personally, I despise your style.....the links take away and the wordplasy that you can only "see" is really annoyin. But I guess thats cus Im audio.
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Old 04-08-09, 08:00 PM   #12
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3-0 Ko

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Old 04-10-09, 07:00 PM   #13
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bumpin .
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Old 04-11-09, 01:14 PM   #14
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Voted For: Coke Dealer

U got this. The other dude dont even know how 2 spell....Ouch,,,

Multis coke
Pers....Coke....
Yeah and u was right he shoulda spaced his shit....I needed a break from dudes terrible shit....
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Old 04-12-09, 12:28 AM   #15
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Voted For: Coke Dealer

This is a close battle in my opinion.
Coke
Positives- Good name use. Good lil personals. Nice flow.
Negatives-It was simple. Not much of a vocabulary but i understand if you don't use that shit on here when its jus da net.
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Positives-I like how you use his name out alot!!!! Your stuff had me laughin also.
Negatives-Streched bars. And i felt like you was makin a diss commercial dissin the coke company and you were pepsi. I understand the way you were goin and i liked it but switch it up a bit.
V/Coke 7/10
Mune/6/10
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