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Old 05-02-09, 10:25 PM   #1
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Da Problem Child vs Young Kidd (LM)

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-05-09 at 10:25 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


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Old 05-02-09, 10:25 PM   #2
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Old 05-02-09, 11:01 PM   #3
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this flaw is cheap, i'll crush him like jaws and teeth
he only thinks he's out of control, only cause i lost his leash
ill spark the beef, losing's imposible like a clock stop
his girl holds it in her mouth until i buss like pop rocks
Young kidd should be somewhere playin hop scotch,cuz your wack man
the dots on your head can kill you and eat you ghost like pacman
i spit the coldest b, you wont just shiver,...you'll break
really,other then your birth, battling me was you biggest mistake
were different because you suck....while my lines are heaven
understand you could blow up if you were a vitctim of 9-11
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Old 05-02-09, 11:02 PM   #4
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blah verse just wanted to get a quick battle poppin.......
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Old 05-02-09, 11:53 PM   #5
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Old 05-05-09, 11:53 PM   #6
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BWHAHA i have less than 7 minutes to drop this...jgsalfdjlwkdjfdwkla Keystyleeee

I've Got 7 Minutes To Drop. Shit..You sLow Anyway..I'm Just Gonna Bull Shit It.
I'm To Fast For You..You Sent Me A PM Asking Me To Not Go "Over The Limit."

Ha. Kidd's Really A Infant..So Be Careful An Listen...Carefree When I'm Dissin..
So Give A Fuck About A Problem? I'm Still Too Young To Even Pay Attention...

Or Even Really Care About The Structure Of Verses...But If I Dump One Your Nervous..
The Real Problem Here Is You'll be Wacker Than Me..And I Dropped This Weak On Purpose..

You Can Have The Win...Your The Sickest Nigga Alive? and You Been A Vet..At Spittin Text?
Thats a Big Accomplisment..Next You'll Be Braggin About Your G'd Up Gang On the Internet...

lsadfjowdfjmdwlfkjwda wackk sauce
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Old 05-05-09, 11:54 PM   #7
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BWHA i made it with like 30 seconds to spareee soon
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Old 05-06-09, 08:26 AM   #8
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people try to throw that "7 minute keystyle" bull shit in to cover up the fact that their verse is wack
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Old 05-06-09, 10:12 AM   #9
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Voted For: Da Problem Child

I've Got 7 Minutes To Drop. Shit..You sLow Anyway..I'm Just Gonna Bull Shit It.
I'm To Fast For You..You Sent Me A PM Asking Me To Not Go "Over The Limit."

Descent opener, but not hard hitting

Ha. Kidd's Really A Infant..So Be Careful An Listen...Carefree When I'm Dissin..
So Give A Fuck About A Problem? I'm Still Too Young To Even Pay Attention...

barely descent


Or Even Really Care About The Structure Of Verses...But If I Dump One Your Nervous..
The Real Problem Here Is You'll be Wacker Than Me..And I Dropped This Weak On Purpose..

Descent

You Can Have The Win...Your The Sickest Nigga Alive? and You Been A Vet..At Spittin Text?
Thats a Big Accomplisment..Next You'll Be Braggin About Your G'd Up Gang On the Internet...

barely descent

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this flaw is cheap, i'll crush him like jaws and teeth
he only thinks he's out of control, only cause i lost his leash

this was a good opener

ill spark the beef, losing's imposible like a clock stop
his girl holds it in her mouth until i buss like pop rocks

barely descent

Young kidd should be somewhere playin hop scotch,cuz your wack man
the dots on your head can kill you and eat you ghost like pacman

Barely descent

i spit the coldest b, you wont just shiver,...you'll break
really,other then your birth, battling me was you biggest mistake

descent

were different because you suck....while my lines are heaven
understand you could blow up if you were a vitctim of 9-11

barely descent


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This was a mediocre battle. I feel that the best lines were:


i spit the coldest b, you wont just shiver,...you'll break
really,other then your birth, battling me was you biggest mistake

this flaw is cheap, i'll crush him like jaws and teeth
he only thinks he's out of control, only cause i lost his leash

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I've Got 7 Minutes To Drop. Shit..You sLow Anyway..I'm Just Gonna Bull Shit It.
I'm To Fast For You..You Sent Me A PM Asking Me To Not Go "Over The Limit."
Or Even Really Care About The Structure Of Verses...But If I Dump One Your Nervous..
The Real Problem Here Is You'll be Wacker Than Me..And I Dropped This Weak On Purpose..



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I believe that Da problem child inched this battle out do to the opener punch, but Young Kidd was close with his two punches.


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Old 05-06-09, 01:40 PM   #10
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nice fair vote......big ups_____________________
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Old 05-06-09, 06:09 PM   #11
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yea except for...i did only have seven minutes to drop that.
lol...

i'm not using an excuse or anything..i expect to lose this...
the time i dropped, the structure, the unfinished thoughts/sketchy punches.

thats not my forte son. lol
you can tell it was a keystyle.
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Old 05-07-09, 07:01 AM   #12
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Good Battle, but da problem child got this...
His punches were stronger and he actually had a flow to it

The lines that won it for me...
"he only thinks he's out of control, only cause i lost his leash"
"really,other then your birth, battling me was you biggest mistake"

Young Kidd pretty much pointed out everything that was wrong with his verse. no structure, no flow, weak punches. I didn't even understand a lot of it.

no hate... good battle... peace...
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Old 05-07-09, 03:10 PM   #13
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yea except for...i did only have seven minutes to drop that.
lol...

i'm not using an excuse or anything..i expect to lose this...
the time i dropped, the structure, the unfinished thoughts/sketchy punches.

thats not my forte son. lol
you can tell it was a keystyle.

thats bullshit.......why the fuck would you try to loose a battle on purpose,ecpecially when you are undefeated, stop frontin!
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Old 05-07-09, 04:02 PM   #14
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lol your an IDIOT if you think i'm frontin.
point (1) its prom week and i've had two finals this week.
point (2) my grandma is in the hospital
point (3) i'm a senior which means crunch time

so i had no time to write out a verse, search for personals.

I'm not trying to LOSE but since mine was a Keystyle. and I doubt yours was..I expect that you'll win.

thats just what im saying.
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Old 05-08-09, 01:38 AM   #15
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dang, if you that busy, maybe you should hold off on the battling??
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