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reall?

This kid couldnt be ILL if he add'd SU to reall
merk'd by Iceman187? My win's as good as sealed
I mean this cat's pathetic check his style...
where's the end of bar?...they go for miles!
fuck this child..Ima pile-drive his head wit my thumb
He's just that tacky! he shouldn't have a toungue
Impale real's lungs? naw...Jet's feelin to freindly
Rappin?...no...this kids day job's at Wendy's...
Atomik flowz?..no no,reall's more like a roamin Homo...
Spittin atomic bombs? more like duds..betta change ya motto

ok.........................................
listen man the name is REALL so get it thru ur head/if you dont.........i'll put a bullet
instead/i love this shit...when niggas under estimate/c'mon carson you faker than them wrestlin tapes/and i dont give a fuck if you joke about my record/but if you do..you will get yo ass jumped like them pieces on chekers/no disrespect dogg but this yo life you riskin/im takin care of this baby call me a pediatrician/and you mother can get this shit too/i dont hold shit bac its jus the motherfukn rules/imma killed this dude
he aint no competitor/imma simply win cause my flo is betta/you scared of me matterfact u scared of the lead/treat this guy like circumsition and cut of pieces of his head/yo whole flo is domb- messed up- sorry and not tight/you pitiful man so go apologize to your life/this the last line so get yo shit straight/b 4 i whind up puttin
your body in a fucced up lake.
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sorry messed up structure.......................................

Punches-Carson
Flow-Carson
Personals-Carson
Meta-None
Multi-Real
Opener-Carson
Closer-Carson
Structure-Carson

Overal-Carson

Alirght Carson pretty much took this with ease, very much ease. Real your structure was fucked up beyond all recognition, I could barely read it. What punches I could read were either weak or extremely played.

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bla...lol are u for real...omg no hate heres my honest vote....

Flow:carson...small and easy to read
Strucutre:carson..Same thing^
Punches:carson...he hardly tried and still merked this punk
personals:carson....lol....same as i said hardly tried
multis:...some from carson...hardly some from reall just a couple
metas:none...if not im just tired cuz i just got done makign asite....
overall=carson...no hate my honest opinion

real work on ya structure...ur lines are to stretched.

Peace out !

CarsonJetx2 for nothing droppin wack.
Blameworthy incredible one sided battle.

yo my vote goes to carson......he took this wit better punches and structure....yo E dawg i told u how structure ur shit...but gettin there homie......stay up...1.....

vote-Carson

Not much of a battle really

Carson got him on personals/punches
He got some nice ones on him
Flow'd a lil batter than Reall
But Reall had a lil more multies
Wordplay.. carson dominated...

so

V/ Jet

hit this up with an honest vote... thanks

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