The door slams shut…

He crumples and weeps
Yells to the darkness but
Barely mumbles his speech ‘cause
The tongue was cut from his cheek.
He’s been there for a week and
He still refuses to eat.
There’s blood on the meat and
He’s not keen on the taste of his teeth.

Feces and vomit envelop the walls.
The cracks in the concrete resemble his skull.
He’s wishing the cell were padded
He’s had it.
All he hears are his fears screaming.
His tears are pleading.
But at least they’re not staining-
‘Cause his eardrums are bleeding
All over his pleats and…
…He hasn’t shown up for work all week!

“I want to play a game.”

High stakes, he’s aces high
His wife left ‘cause he left their life
On a bluffed bet!
But it’s not that simple, yet
‘Cause divorce isn’t intercourse…
…Their son is seein’ it!
And he’s feelin’ it, not pleasure but pain
His parents are foldin’
Over a fuckin’ Hold ‘Em game!

The door creeps open…

His wife gets dragged in, unconscious and
Bleeding profusely
Starvation has set in but
He’s filled with adrenalin-induced energy
A medical kit is quickly thrown to her side
Along with a flashlight
An axe?
And the will to keep her alive…
He scrambles and hacks but
The chain on his leg refuses to crack!

He hacks and he hacks but
Nothing will work!
His wife is starting to look
Like a cherry desert!
Breathing heavily he takes off his shirt
Wraps his leg up and prepares for the worst
He hacks and he screams!
The agony is obscene but
His poker face remains.
He chops through the tibia
Only the fibia’s left…
And it knows better then to call his bet.

Diamonds, Clubs, Spades, and Hearts

His rotting flesh combined
With the putrid scent
Of vomit breath but
In the silhouette of death
He scrambles for what he has left.
His nails grind as he crawls
The floor is too rough
But the best riches of all lie
Throughout the diamond bluffs!

He stretches a sore limb
With a whim and a groan
Grasps the first-aid kit
But wait!
It’s only holding a note!

He reads feverishly before
He furiously chucks it away
“IM SORRY!!” he screams
Through the gaps in his teeth…

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.
.
And here the King and Queen lay
To the Joker’s dismay…
The day had come where
The two make a pair,
Defeating the aces-high.

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your metas are fucking crazy, i read it twice and the way each
section is done is like i said fucking crazy, these lines were very
interesting to me...




these three lines just felt deep, i saw the medical kit as him tryin
to salvage the relationship, while the flash light was like hope,
and the axe became his desperation, which for me made the
whole piece make sense...i started to see the piece in a whole
new light...the connections throughout suddenly became clear
i saw everything as metaphors for a relationship in trouble,
the diamonds bluff...for me became divorce...which correlates
with the third stanza, i have theories on the others but its the
ending im having the most problems with...if im on the right
track...are they at the divorce table or have you twisted the
ending to a prequel to when they first got married, its the
jokers dismay line thats throwing me...and if im totally wrong
sorry bout that…but at least you know I saw something in
this piece and I enjoyed it…engaged the mind…dope

whooooa i dont know maaan, i like ur theory but from what im seein its told like it is man.......im really likin this shyt here
this is like some shyt from SAW......i mean from the story it went back in the present and then to the past and now its slightly in the future towards the end

stakes are high .....aces high......all equal down to the family.......the guy was ABOUT to cheat on his wife i guess......or has been cheatin but the wife doesnt know......dude is always gone and the kid is seein that a divorce is comin up mainly cuz pop isnt home and mommy decided to leave......and all because neither one of em tried to come out str8 forward to solve it all........basically they were both bluffin puttin the marriage at stake.......

what he meant by divorce isnt intercourse........they didnt get a divorce over intercourse.....the pop i mean cuz apparantly she didnt know

the joker is who he is...the joker....the guy from saw who sees all this happenin and brung both of em in the chamber in the 1st place......
basically when she gets thrown in there shes barely livin and theres a chance to save her......this is another test to see if hes gonna try to save her or eat her since he hasnt eaten.......the medical kit is what it is........but had a note.....what does it say? *shrugs* but he sure is regrettin everything at that point......so in the end they both die.....prob due to the bleedin from both since he cut his leg off.....and well it ended the aces high which was their marriage, which was at stake in the 1st place

my thing is.....what about the kid??

but this was good....reaaaaal good challenges the mind and made u think about it all

nice

damn homie i had 2 read all over tha place but gotta $ay i like thi$ piece alot of multi$, metaphor$, very creative wit thi$ 1 here ....very deep
tha whole $tory was very in depth keep up tha good work fa $ho 10/10

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i give it a 9 .nice work ,it was worth looking all over the place