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Old 08-24-06, 11:53 AM   #1
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Old 08-24-06, 07:34 PM   #3
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damn im liking yuou on this
this is a type of song i could never picture you on lol
btu im loving you on it
eminds me of some sir mix alot/ too short lol
my possys on broad way idk this what this track reminds me of lol
idk im loving this lol
no complaints
buzzin like a silent phone like it
broke off liek ashes in my ash tray
smash it splash it on the matress

just wish there was another verse
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Old 08-25-06, 05:38 AM   #4
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El Rizzy - word i can feel you on that, typically i can't stand beats in this category, but this one "spoke to me", soo..i spoke back lol. I stay flexible nah mean?!!

Willa - word up mayne i def feel that. ya never figured ya boy A could make you shake ya ass liek this huh? lol, always a surprise outta this guy lol


Lets bring this back to the tizzop. Get bent and lean to this!
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Old 08-25-06, 02:33 PM   #5
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i like the beat...

hook...yeah distorted voice stunt was cool but the louder voice cud have been a lil lower or shud have made it deeper..but its iight


verse 1 ...nice flow...i was busy commenting on the hook didnt listen to the lyrics...


verse 2...u dragged some rhymes...,flows are still iight...


............you had an adequate presence on this track..ur delivery just alright...


............too much silence after hook here...

well yeah u ended it nicely....


thats it at that!
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Old 08-25-06, 02:40 PM   #6
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THis shit is fuckin dope...typa song that after i'm done listenen i'm pissed at myself because i didnt think of somethin like this... dope beat.. my style a shit.. more mainstream....good work man
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Old 08-25-06, 05:22 PM   #7
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LMAO... love your fuckin' hook. so dope.... omg this is ill man.

first verse. ill. lovew how the adlibs distorted too. slow as molasses. nice lol. overall ill...

hook illness again

second verse, nice multi strings, nice flow changes. love this beat. damn lol LOL this is dope. ill verse....

hook again. lmao this shit got me rockin' shit. I could picture a video for this. lmao

like how in end you like panned it real low and said shit. dopeeee

Overall, lmao this shit was bananas yo. Felt like Nelly and Paul Wall would of hopped on this shit. commerical shit from you. But you had nice lyrics, so it wasn't just a "I'ma go dumb, and dumb my lyrics down too". so props for that. Loved this joint man. Def DLed this. My favorite track from you. You know I love that commercial shit. haha word up. this was ill.

only thing is, I thought outro kinda too long, should of just done that repeating shit for a lil while, but iunno just sounded a lil too long. but that's only bad thing. other than that. DOPE 9.7/10

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Old 08-26-06, 03:48 AM   #8
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LMAO... love your fuckin' hook. so dope.... omg this is ill man.

first verse. ill. lovew how the adlibs distorted too. slow as molasses. nice lol. overall ill...

hook illness again

second verse, nice multi strings, nice flow changes. love this beat. damn lol LOL this is dope. ill verse....

hook again. lmao this shit got me rockin' shit. I could picture a video for this. lmao

like how in end you like panned it real low and said shit. dopeeee

Overall, lmao this shit was bananas yo. Felt like Nelly and Paul Wall would of hopped on this shit. commerical shit from you. But you had nice lyrics, so it wasn't just a "I'ma go dumb, and dumb my lyrics down too". so props for that. Loved this joint man. Def DLed this. My favorite track from you. You know I love that commercial shit. haha word up. this was ill.

only thing is, I thought outro kinda too long, should of just done that repeating shit for a lil while, but iunno just sounded a lil too long. but that's only bad thing. other than that. DOPE 9.7/10

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word up man, thanks a lot lol.

damn, the video huh haha what would it be like?
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Old 08-26-06, 04:15 AM   #9
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Aight I can already tell this shits fire

Whats Hot-Damn htis beats fire
Your flow is like woah..seriously it had me like "wait hold on"
The lyrics are well well on topic...pretty hot
Hook is fire

Whats Good:Mixing.....its hot.....the hook thing with the deeper voice was just a LIL too high...lower it and it'd be hotter

Whats Okay:Nothin

what sucks: nothin

Whats wack:nothing


This is just fuckin fire dude serious..i think i'm gonna have too give this a download.....this track is just iono perfect for a mixtape/cd cuz it'd be catchin some attention on the real......Your flow is just soo damn laid back and wow...lol this was a suprize too me seriously

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Old 08-26-06, 10:56 AM   #10
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word up man, thanks a lot lol.

damn, the video huh haha what would it be like?

iunno yo, maybe like just rollin' in car with sunglasses and shit lookin' like him ---> . pimpin' the ladies. And then at end you log onto RV, and RTF on my track
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Old 08-27-06, 01:28 AM   #11
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LMAO Oh shit. Pexx on a beat like this is crazy.
Your Whole style seems switched up a little on it. But it's still sick as fuck. Reminds me of Fabo with a deeper voice and a more consistent flow. The Beat is good considering i was contemplating using a beat that sounds just like this, but now i dont know if i could show this up. LOL the hook is fucking dope.

I'm probably gonna bump this because people would go crazy for this crack.

Good ups Pexx.
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Old 08-27-06, 03:18 PM   #12
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I'm lame, so I didn't listen......


lol....just kidding. Anyway, I wasn't really feeling the hook too much. I think you should have had the regular tone of voice in the hook a little lower toned, but not as low as the other part. I don't know......but anyway, the rest was on point. Didn't seem like your normal shit, but it was nice to hear a little something different. Good shit overall man....
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Old 08-27-06, 03:35 PM   #13
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got ya stunna shades on?.....nah but really not gon leave too much feed except that the verses sounded a lil.......plain i think is the word i want to use.....with a beat like this i feel you need a lil more backround noise or something to keep it hype a bit at least to keep intrest in it....i did like the hook tho....still say maybe some backround noise would help......its nothing too major and still just a personal opinion.....i unno thats my word
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Old 08-28-06, 03:17 PM   #14
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word word, thanks a lot nukkasand nukkarettes

upperizing for more where that came from
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Old 08-29-06, 06:43 AM   #15
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wow, surprising man. Your hook is so catchy, I like the effects you gave it. Your lyrics are pretty good, nice comical lines in there. Your delivery is hot and I've always enjoyed your voice. the beat is pretty killa, not bad man overall I like this joint. I wouldn't mind hearin you spit a solo on some deep kinda story shit. I know you like to extend your horizons, do that up sometime. just a idea anyway good job.

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